FOURTEEN: Revolution

Pureblood
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“I’ve never been scared of your kind.” 

“See?! Humans can really be lovely!” And then I saw him, the President. I saw him touch Bomi’s face as he leans closer to bite and get a good taste of her blood. Just when he was about to feed on her, I was quick to shift in their position and stand between them pushing him away. 

“You shouldn’t be here Bbom-ah. It’s not safe.” I said disregarding the consequences of my actions of disrespecting the head of the Council. I did expect that the guards would rush and pick me up, lock me under the prison hall where Eunji and I stayed but instead.. everyone inside this spacious room stopped moving. It’s like time freezes for me and Bomi to escape. 

“And you shouldn’t be here too.” Wait what? I turn in the direction where the same familiar voice is coming from. It’s Bomi in her red coat. This can’t be.

I tried to look closely to see her face but it’s as hazy as a bad weather sky is. “How?”

“You should stop coming back to this memory, Rong. Time to move on.” Bomi said and that’s when I realize that I’m living in a dream as what humans call it. She then turned her back and started walking away. “No bbom-ah, don’t leave!” I tried to catch up on her but when I’m about to hold her hand, I woke up.

 

“Thank goodness you’re awake!” Soeun greeted me as she stood from the bed across me and reach for my hand, my palm that’s covered with red cloth. It’s real. “Are you okay? Does it still hurt?”

“Where is she?” I asked but her expression says that she has no idea of who this person I’m looking for is.

I started packing up my things, quickly got out of bed, and storm out of the room. What happened last night is real. There’s no way in hell that I’m alive and resting in this inn if not for her. Bomi couldn’t have gotten far.

“Wait! Hold on a sec! You sure you can travel? We can stay if you need more rest, Chorong.”

“I’m fine, we really need to go now.” 

Soeun followed and as we’re about to exit the inn, the keeper called for our attention. “You two!”

“Oh right! Payment!” Soeun hurriedly digs for gold coins in her bag but stopped when she heard the innkeeper laughed. “It’s paid, isn’t it?”

“Indeed.”

“Did- did you happen to see who brought us here?” I asked hoping that he recognized the face of the chosen one. But hearing his mind filled with confusion, I already knew that he’s just as clueless as Soeun is.

“I’m not the one on duty last night but someone did leave a note for you.” he said and gave me a folded piece of paper with my name on it, Park Chorong.

“Try not to get yourself killed, I’ll see you when the blood moon appears.”

I tried not to show any emotions over reading her message but there’s no denying over the fact that I’m glad that I haven’t gone crazy. That it’s not just some kind of hallucination on missing someone so dearly.

Soeun and I then walked outside and I can’t help but hear her worried, sorry, and grateful thoughts. I’ve been really cold to her when I know I shouldn’t be. 

“Hey.” I called as I stop my steps and face her direction.

And as if she’s just waiting for me to start up a conversation, she bombarded me with words that she’s been trying to conceal for the past hours, “Please don’t be mad at me. I’m really sorry, Chorong! I didn’t mean to- I’m out of control. I-” It’s visible in her eyes that she’s upset. Upset when she shouldn’t be. I am fully aware of the risks I took to save her.

“It’s okay Soeun-ah. I needed to save you and I’m glad that I was able to.”

“You’re too kind to me,” Soeun said and maybe I am, maybe I’ve been really kind. She reminds me of someone so close to my heart. I guess it’s one factor as to how it was easy for me to share things with her. “I don’t know if I could pay the sum of what you did for me but if there’s anything that I could do, tell me.” There is something.

“Actually, I’ve been meaning to ask..” 

“Ask me anything! I owe you my life, giving you answers to your questions is the least I could do.” 

“I need to know what happened to you last night.” I said and she started walking towards the far end of the town center, far from the strolling vampires.

“I knew you’re here to take over the ghouls. I, on the other hand, was there to be taken by them. I’m the pawn, Chorong.” Pawn? What does she mean by taken and pawn? This only means that she knows about the situation with the monsters. I’m starting to feel like it’s much complicated than I’m expecting it to be. I looked at her with confusion and let her continue to speak, “It isn’t news to us that someone is attacking vampires and letting them meet their end. Our town leaders made a plan to catch the person behind it. We’re instructed by the government that by the time someone took the said commission, we’d proceed.”

“So you’re saying that you knew about it but didn’t tell me?!” 

“It’s not that I don’t want to say it, I simply can’t.”

I cannot believe how Soeun’s personality matches Bomi well, she’s just as crazy as the other one is. “And you- you just offer yourself with no backups to save you?” Absurd. Because as far as I can remember, when I scouted the area there are no vampires around. Just ghouls.

“The best warriors that our little town has were there but we’re outnumbered and that’s when the mission failed.” With that number of hordes, they should’ve known that their plan wouldn’t work. Though I shouldn’t be the one saying this given that I took this job all by myself. But then again.. I’m built differently. I trained all my life to have this skills in me, blood of the greatest warrior runs in me. 

“Please tell me that you at least saw or recognize the clan behind all this. Who attacked you?” I asked hoping that she didn’t lose it during the process of her death.

“Here comes the crazy part, it is

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pandanonymous
Oh how delighted I am with the amount of Chobom contents we had. My heart is full <3 It’s great to see the same people in the comment section, I am as always = forever grateful. Also sorry for dragging the chapters T.T Next one would be the battle between the Lone vamp/s and Rong! Stay a lil longer.

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Panda0619
#1
Chapter 23: Pandanonymous, I hope you would finish this story, as it's seriously a masterpiece.. it'll be a waste to keep it hanging..

and I probably speak for the many subscribers who are dying to know how it'll develop from here.. =)
AegyoPRASH
#2
Chapter 23: Pls tell me you’ll be able to finish this story author, I really need updates after today’s news that rongie is innocent! Yours is one of my favorites.
ckaz99
#3
Chapter 23: uweehee!! Having them together in this eases my worries greatly too HEHEHE it's fluff!! our couple!! before going into battle~ I have to say all that jumping off the cliff is really a heart attack from Yoon Bomi but well.. what other way is there to practice Chorong's death-defying stunt abilities? It's the right tension and yet there's the hilarity of the situation xD The little jealousy to begin with too! And ending it off with full sleep cuddles, the greasiness gone so abruptly pfftthahaha, but oooo "the one and only heir that I adore" - not even subtle!&@! My heart's been filled up again. I didn't realise they would reunite going into this battle, thinking it was Chorong's mission to prove, but now that they are, I'm treasuring that strength in togetherness even more.. T.T It's about fighting alongside each other in battle! And being with loved ones is strong, not weak at all. Thank you for the updateee<3
EarlySpring
#4
Chapter 23: The chapter begins with Chorong being very confident in her plan of attack: how many people she needs and what their role is going to be. Chorong has spent decades hunting ghouls and was very good at it, so of course she should be confident about her plan. Yet, just a few lines later, Chorong has that little moment where she starts feeling a bit anxious about her plan and questionning her decision to bring a small number of people with her... It's the simple things like this that always get me. The little moments that make the characters feel real. :D

When Chorong and her group started setting up their camp, I started thinking... Bomi has been keeping an eye on Chorong for so many years now, watching over her when she was doing commissions for the government, there's no way she's going to let Chorong go on her first leading battle without checking in on her. Surely enough, Bomi did not disappoint! She came back early, as Chorong pointed out, but no one is going to complain about it when it means getting sweet chobom moments. <3

That thought about people knowing Bomi as the next President, but Chorong knowing the real Yoon Bomi. <3 <3 <3

I'm happy Chorong is finally mastering her power. The fact that she was training with Bomi made it perfect.

In life, we usually associate comfort with warmth. But here, in this vampire story, Chorong compared Bomi's kiss and the comfort it brought her to a cold night. That was genius!

At the end of the chapter, when Chorong goes to talk with her people and Bomi slows down her steps... That moment was so perfect! This is Chorong's moment to showcase her leadership and Bomi knows that. With Bomi's high position in the vampire world, walking side by side with Chorong while she addresses her people could bring some confusion as to who is really calling the shots here (Chorong or the government). By walking behind Chorong, Bomi shows her support to "the great heir" without overshadowing her. This was such a key element for me, I never would've thought about it myself and I applaud you for including it.

And yes! Every Chobom update we had felt like a small victory. A step in the right direction on the path to get back our Chorong and Apink!
Panda0619
#5
Chapter 23: Wow this is becoming that relationship that many can only yearn for but only those blessed would encounter.. to fall in love and stay in love with someone who not only understands you quite well, but helps you grow and takes on the world with you..
phouse
#6
Chapter 23: can a vampire get a heart attack? I think chorong almost got one in this chapter

That being said, i like how on previous chapters her friends use bomi image to wake chorong's power while here bomi herself help chorong to master her power. bomi's crazy btw.
most of chobom moments are happy and serene, they really are water to the fire for each other :') anyway it's calm before the storm, and I really can't wait to see them kicking on their first mission together

Ps. Just like when she boldly held chorong waist in front of soeun, ofc she make sure everyone on the mission know chorong is hers. Bomi can act indifferent all she wants with chorong but I know a jealousy is when I see it :p
AegyoPRASH
#7
Chapter 23: Yoon Bomi knows how to not be discreet. Love their moments on this chap. Can’t wait for the battle
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 22: I'm finally here!! HAHAHA ah the chapter I've been looking forward to between my studies~ Chorong's becoming a leader woowoo! but there are many more things to question and be suspicious about. I wonder how every detail Chorong latches onto will play out? Things she's not being told, Hyungdon's unavailability in that time... Hmm! I'm so glad to see the conversation with Seungwoo after all this being resolved :) That lesson Chorong has to remember about her loved ones is echoing around with that. And 5 more days, how will that be~
Thank you for the chapter and on chobom day!! Right the photo ackkk not only Chorong but it's chobom and the first we've seen Chorong in forever! T.T I was already missing Bomi in this chapter too HAHA Chorong's feelings with being apart I just hold onto so easily :')
EarlySpring
#9
Chapter 22: Chorong has been having so many questions for so long and people have been rather evasive in their answers most of the time. Now that her ascension day is imminent, with all the responsibilities coming with it, plus the impending war, it makes sense that she wants answers now more than ever. Also, I find it fitting that Seungwoo ends up being the one to finally give her a little bit of information, giving the history between the two and the fact that he wasn't even supposed to know what he knows to begin with.

Chorong missing Bomi and the way you described it was such a sweet moment. <3
While on the subject... When Chobom were together, Chorong was able to put her negative thoughts aside. She was simply happy. But once she spends time away from Bomi and misses her, her insecurities about Bomi's position and the weight of their responsibilities all come bubbling back up to the surface. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. It's one of many examples that illustrates just how much the Chorong from this story is a well rounded and believable character. Her emotions are relatable and help us connect with her more.

"My conversation with Seungwoo after that council meeting hits me like that boulder thrown by Namjoo."
OMG, that metaphor! XD
And it's another great example of how you're able to make this world believable by inserting little moments or thoughts that are specific to it.

Thank you for the update, I'm looking forward to see what happens next! :)

And yes, Bomi's instagram post with Chorong... I think a lot of people got emotional over these pictures. I know I did! I've been missing Apink, Chorong and Chobom so much. When my sister and I saw the pictures, we literally hugged each other with teary eyes. :')
phouse
#10
Chapter 22: chorong already missing bomi on her way home(awww)and it reminds me of the times she waited bomi lifetimes to circle again.
she really went through a lot TT, and after bomi knows everything too no wonder they really can't keep their hand off each other now lol. the way they have four lifetimes of memory (especially chorong) but still act like they're on the first date always made me giddy ><

finally the siblings meet. good thing chorong and seungwoo meet now, the situation will be a whole lot different if they meet a few chapters back. so seungwoo come back home for her ascension day right? in five days and there's the mission too. i hope no unwanted happenings happened on those 5 days but hey the baton is on your hand ;)

i just like to pick up patterns and whatever information that intrigues me. i hope you wouldn't mind, and just ignore the question when it's necessary :))
just one more thing. all chorong questions and president's weird shenanigans will be explained when we know his power, isn't it?