True friends are those who always stay with you- Dara

Clear My Heart, Set Me Free

[Dara's POV]

When I was trooping back to class fuming, what I had done settled into my mind. I had just left my friends who stuck by me through thick and thin for Jiyong, who clearly wasn't part of that equation. Doubts that began to fill my mind cleared once I saw Jiyong resting fitfully on his desk. Sighing, I plopped down next to him and brushed the sticky strands of hair away from his forehead.

He had gone back to sleep.

When a tiny frown formed between his eyebrows, I smoothed it with my fingers, feeling him sigh softly. I'll just apologise to Bommie later, I mused and rested my head on the table like Jiyong, facing him.

Was it really worth it to stay by his side?

I suppose only time could tell.

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"La la la la!" I trilled on the way back home. Jiyong's lips tightened just a fraction as he glared at me. "Aw, come on, can't I afford to be happy once in awhile? You're always so moody." Ignoring me, he increased his pace. I pouted and hurried to catch up with him. I was just being glad that Bom and Chaerin had accepted my apology. Did he really have to put out my flame?
 
Bom, Chaerin and the boys had graciously accepted my apology, saying that they understood how I felt.
 
"Aw, it's alright Ssantoki. The power of love makes anything possible." Bom had sighed dreamily while batting her eyelashes at TOP. How obvious can she be? Chaerin just petted my hand and smiled a small smile. TOP had grinned charmingly, waving my apology away with his hand. Seungri, on the other hand, was grumbling something about how fast female emotions change until Chaerin whacked his head to shut up. That couple was just too cute for words.
 
"You're being all cold again!"

When he finally turned around to glare fully at me, I gulped. "Want to know this reason why I'm so pissed off now?" He hissed. I nodded eagerly and bounced on my toes.

"Because you ing decorated my timetable with your barbie doll pens. That's why!" He barked into my face.

"Hey! They weren't barbie doll pens! I outgrew those already!" My face burning with embarrassment, I remembered the time when I was in the barbie doll phase THAT ALL GIRLS GO THROUGH. My mother decided to buy me a pack of pink barbie doll pens for my 5th birthday. Me, being the excited young little girl, had crawled through the fence into Jiyong's house, wanting to show him my new pens. When he had to go to the toilet, I felt a little michievous and did a little doodle over his books.

Okay. Maybe 'a little doodle' was an understatement.

He never did get over his precious books being converted to an art by the one and only- Me.

"That's a low blow." Mumbling, I bit the insides of my cheeks.

"Barbie dolls."

"Oh shut up."

"A klutz who leaps in from house to house and likes barbie dolls."

"Oh shut up."

"And upset my bowl of cornflakes in the morning."

"I SAID SHUT UP ALREADY." I screamed. He smirked in response and slipped into his house.

"Bye Miss Klutz."

ARGH IT TOTALLY ISN'T WORTH IT TO STAY NEXT TO HIM.

Growling, I stomped back home and slammed the door behind me. Jerk.

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[Jiyong's POV]

I sighed when I entered the dark and gloomy place I dared to call home. Whatever colour I had in my day previously with Dara had been replaced by grey again. Pulling my jacket off, I was about to dump it in the laundry basket. It was then when I passed by the kitchen that a strong stench of alcohol hit me. Dread filled my body.

"Hello Jiyong." A drunken voice called out to me.

Mother.

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O.o I realised that I made many stupid mistakes in the previous chapter *wallows in shame*

:P Okay, this is kinda short. Oops

Personally, I prefer writing long chapters, but there are some times where I tend to rattle and add in additional stuff._.

@justcallmeamber: hahhhhh? O.o vat?

Anyway, thanks for the comment,  you! ^_^ It really made my day! 

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DeannaSchafer #1
Chapter 14: I think it was a good decision to rewrite the story. For angst to be the main feature of this piece, I thought Jiyong should portray someone who has major attitude issues instead of being just suicidal. And then for Dara, I think u should give her character a problem too ie a druggie or something to make it more "dramatic" lol (then most probably u have to change the title for this)

The initial story was good, I liked it! Just not that in-line with the main focus of angst. Hoping for more great works from u! ;)
NamelessDongholic #2
Chapter 14: hahaha i love your gifs at the end ;)
i read the foreword and was like... ehh :/ but i read it anyway and ':/' turned into 'UPDATE THR BESHIZZLES OUT OF THIS :D'
so yeah... i read 'Just Awhile More' and... OOOOOOMMGGGG SO SO SO SOOOOOOO SAD but awesome. I loved it.
Get this one rewritten soon! I cant wait! :)
nissin-san
#3
Chapter 14: I want mooore! TT__TT
I love this story! Please, update soon!
Hengsho! :3
ant12345 #4
Chapter 1: actually i have a friend who rather likes to cut herself...i rily didnt understand it..cause she was funny.i mean she has a great personality..she has many friends..and i really treasure this person..but i dont understand why she likes to cut herself..in fact im the rather quite one and the loner..and shes the one who cheers me up..it looks like i shuld have the tendency to do that..but i dont have the least bit inclination..but her..sigh..
gd_ume
#5
Chapter 14: Truthfully i really like the story authornim... you might think me weird but i feel that we've got a lot to learn from this story.. still i know that you've got your reasons why you wanted to.... so i'll just stay here and wait for your update/new story, neh? God bless you always...
dobheePark
#6
Chapter 14: i'll wait for the revised version of this story authornim, so please update soon... goodluck! :))
purple_bee #7
Chapter 14: Ya authornim! Let us know when d revised story is available...and hey! Do u know me personally or something? I just can't take it off my mind when you personally put
my name n d past chapters.,well anyway,thanks and gud luck!
wishful
#8
Chapter 14: ASDFGHJKL;

I'm so glad that you at least haven't forgotten us! D: To be honest, this was the first story that I ever read on aff, and I really have a soft spot for it. /shot. Please let me know when the new version is up so that I can subscribe to it!
gd_ume
#9
Chapter 13: Just one more chapter for JFAM, authornim right? So i guess we don't have long to wait for the next update..kkk... waiting patiently then....
gd_ume
#10
Chapter 1: OMG!!! poor jiyong.... such a selfish mom... i really hope someone will save him...