Bleeding Blue (SEQUEL!!)

Description
"Our end was inevitable. It was pronounced from the beginning. But why couldn’t something happen, like a massive turn of events to change our destiny?
Every single time he molds his hands into mine, I feel as though everything is perfect in this world. Every time he gives me a smile, I know that I am falling deeper in love with him. Every single time we sit together to have our meals, I know that I want a life with him… Just not here and not like this.
If only we were different people with different situations, then maybe it wouldn’t hurt so much every time we think of the future. It is as though we are both holding onto a bomb, already sparked at its bud. It is going to explode and we are both going to suffer."
Foreword
Jo is kidnapped and taken to an island by a wanted criminal named Byun Baekhyun. On that little paradise, surrounded by waters she finds the part of the criminal which is overlooked by everyone.
He's the gentle wind and the rising sun instead of the storm and the scorching heat.
This is my entry to Laulau95's writing contest. It's my first time ever trying out on a competition and I am excited!
Click here to know more on the contest.
Genre: Angst, Fluff, Criminal AU
Characters: Baekhyun, OC & Xuimin
Prompts: I was not directly inspired by a prompt but I did take out some prompts and have incorporated it into my story.
“I just need to know that you won’t forget about me.”- Don’t forget about me, Cloves.
“-but I guess, if I love you, I should let you move on.” – 17 Again ( 2009)
“ I was born when she kissed me, I died when she left. I lived a few weeks, the time that she loved me.” – In a Lonely Place (1950)
“If I told you where I’ve been, would you still call me baby?” –Dark Star, Jaymes Young.
Length: Approximately 10 chapters.
I'd appreciate lots if you can read through it and help me out by picking out my mistakes or just simply encourage me. I'm an amateur writer. Go easy on me. :)
The sequel to this story is here after four years of finishing the story T.T Thank you for all the immense support.
Here's the link to the story ^^
“Let’s pray that we meet in the next life when we are both very normal, very lively, and leading beautiful lives.”
The first time I met Byun Baekhyun, the quiet poet slash scholar, he ran into me with his bike, knocking me onto a bed of wildflowers.
The second time I met Byun Baekhyun, he bumped into me so hard everything in my hands went flying.
The third time I met Byun Baekhyun, he spilled his coffee all over my crisp white shirt.
And those were just the first three times.
Needless to say, my eyes ran red everytime I saw him.
That amazing poster is made by CrownedMayhem!
Thank you so much for your love. I love it :')
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