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my immortal
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blindly following the one she loves would enough to describe how she is from then on. his habit of changing girlfriend like changing his underwear become more daring, showing themself just before her eyes. he doesn't know how she cried her eyes out alone everytime that happened. he broke her heart so many time but he manage to consume her thought, despite the pain of his image haunting her in every attempt of forgeting him and her feelings. kwon jiyong able to do that, ruining her mind and feelings that she doesn't know anymorewhat to do about him. she hates him but she couldn't live without his presence close to her.

"happy 18th birthday hunchae"

cold touch slightly dropped on her neck, sparkling diamond fill the lonely skin perfectly complementing her dress. despite so many people in the room waiting for the birthday girl, both of them just stand away from their eyes to be alone and enjoy their time together. his hands pulled her to a back hug makes her face heated up from a brush of breath on her shoulder. she remember their promise, for her to polish herself inside out, to wait for him because he also wait for her, and to make him fall for her. she has been doing that, giving her all to him, heart and mind for him and she felt great about showing him how much she loves his presence.

"in only a year you've become a lady, never know you

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Sweet_Alyssum #1
Chapter 12: I've never seen that coming tho, honestly I dislike Ji in here for being such a dickhead for constantly thinking Chae is being childish and immature. The problem is that Ji, you made her feel that way and as a wife Chaerin needs assurance from his man. Actions sometimes are not enough and so does words, if the situation were handled first-hand then the consequences wouldn't turn into a disaster and full of regrets.


And back to the inspiration behind the story, I'd say it's well thought.
babyda91
#2
Chapter 12: I cannot give you upvote before..but now here i am again to give you one after done read again..will come again tho.
syeda_fz #3
Chapter 12: The*$#+??? I hate sad endings!!! Damn poor CL is always in pain!!!
babyda91
#4
Chapter 10: And yess Jiyong so cruel & selfish how could he is not even once say 'i love you' bfore. Then Chae continue suffer T^T until the END
babyda91
#5
Chapter 12: I hate youuuu
babyda91
#6
Chapter 12: OMGGGGGGGGGGG
blackwonderer #7
Chapter 12: Now if you understand the lyric, i'm sure u will get why i put the ending this way. As i Said please mind the lyric because those would tell how the story goes. Thank your for your support till now. I hope u will appreciate this story even though it's So far from perfect. Hope u had a good time reading this, n see u in my other stories if u would gladly read them ^^
babyda91
#8
Chapter 8: Omg Jiyong such a dickhead. I hate him. He so selfish, put Chae for granted only. Told Chae to wait but he play as much as he want. Chae better for someone else! >_<
Vivianv96 #9
Chapter 7: Omg update soon
DJ_GONG
#10
Chapter 5: Ugggghhhh..... I hate this side of Jiyong.... bunnyboy a.k.a playboy... poor Chae eomma T.T