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my immortal
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"when you cried i'd wipe away all of your tears.

when you'd scream i'd fight away all of your fears.

and i held your hands through all of these years.

but you still have all of me"

 

rustling sounds of feet hitting on dry leafs on the ground sounding clearly to the ears, small steps of a child following the older one hastily, but her small feet couldn't reach the boy infront of her, he seems in a hurry or so she thought. they keep on walking away from home, away from the eyes of their parents. her breath huffing and puffing for she has been trying to catch up to his pace, with fail. she feels her chest tighten by the way her heart beating, sweat trailing down from her forehead. but she keep speed walking not letting his figure getting any further. she doesn't knows where they are going, because this is the first time for her to be away from home that far, but she feels it's alright when he's around she could go anywhere.

her eyes focusing on the scenery ahead of them finally to make sure where they are going. a lake before them illuminating the sunlight and trees surrounding them. they are walking close to the forest. the girl wonder what will they gonna do in there. but a bump on her head hitting a warm body of the boy stopped her walk and two light brown orbs captivate her as usual before she smiles, with chest still pumping the air from their long journey.

"lets play hide and seek. you be the seeker"

being with him in unknown place still make her feel safe, so for the child to relize he is not in her view after she count to ten was what she called fear.

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Sweet_Alyssum #1
Chapter 12: I've never seen that coming tho, honestly I dislike Ji in here for being such a dickhead for constantly thinking Chae is being childish and immature. The problem is that Ji, you made her feel that way and as a wife Chaerin needs assurance from his man. Actions sometimes are not enough and so does words, if the situation were handled first-hand then the consequences wouldn't turn into a disaster and full of regrets.


And back to the inspiration behind the story, I'd say it's well thought.
babyda91
#2
Chapter 12: I cannot give you upvote before..but now here i am again to give you one after done read again..will come again tho.
syeda_fz #3
Chapter 12: The*$#+??? I hate sad endings!!! Damn poor CL is always in pain!!!
babyda91
#4
Chapter 10: And yess Jiyong so cruel & selfish how could he is not even once say 'i love you' bfore. Then Chae continue suffer T^T until the END
babyda91
#5
Chapter 12: I hate youuuu
babyda91
#6
Chapter 12: OMGGGGGGGGGGG
blackwonderer #7
Chapter 12: Now if you understand the lyric, i'm sure u will get why i put the ending this way. As i Said please mind the lyric because those would tell how the story goes. Thank your for your support till now. I hope u will appreciate this story even though it's So far from perfect. Hope u had a good time reading this, n see u in my other stories if u would gladly read them ^^
babyda91
#8
Chapter 8: Omg Jiyong such a dickhead. I hate him. He so selfish, put Chae for granted only. Told Chae to wait but he play as much as he want. Chae better for someone else! >_<
Vivianv96 #9
Chapter 7: Omg update soon
DJ_GONG
#10
Chapter 5: Ugggghhhh..... I hate this side of Jiyong.... bunnyboy a.k.a playboy... poor Chae eomma T.T