Calling IcicleBoy

Eternal Diversion

 

Annyeong haseyo~~Welcome to your poster review request dear,IcicleBoy.I am HannaJoo and i am on charge to review your graphic~!LET’S START!

 

Appearance:-[9/10]

Good job,dude ^^ it is awesome!

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Colours:-[13/15]

The colours suits the angsty theme.But since there’s only black and white so uhh,i’m sorry for deducting the marks ><
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Pictures(s) Used:-[13/15]

Perfect marks for perfect job XD!The pictures are awesomely good and the quality is high too ^^ just the boy pics on right side looks a bit erased ^^
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Character Positioning/Size:-[5/5]

It is awesome ^^
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Resources/Stocks/Effect:-[25/30]

I think you overuse the resources ^^ There’s too much thing you overlayed here ^^ but its okay,its still awesome :D Btw,the characters looks a bit weird with the [is it thunder?or tree branch?whatever the name is XD] on it ^^.Maybe you should erase it a bit?You can also try some effects to make it looks even more jjang!But i am highly recommended you to use some effects on the text since its looks quite....weird?

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Font:-[3/5]

I like how you use different fonts for the text XD But you know what?The "everlasting" words looks a bit bug there since the black colour is same with the background colour.Maybe you can try glow effect ^^
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Other/Techniques:-[12/15]

The character’s pic looks a bit cut out?The boy on the right side[idk what’s his name].His head looks a bit erased here ^^ try to be more careful while cutting the background ^^ You can add some special effects too.Since you’re not using Photoshop or GIMP idk how to teach you about this.But if you want to see it.You can check out my tutorial here—-> CLICK~~~
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Overall:-80

Grade:-A-

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Leeraneul #1
Chapter 12: my daughterr.. lol
buingbuingwaffles
#2
Chapter 18: There's no delete button on my laptop, just 'backspace button' /sobs.
Minminjee #3
Chapter 29: thankyouuu!!! ^^
Ogami-kun
#4
Chapter 15: I dunno how to put a sentence/word in GIMP.. sorry Im a noob at editing pictures using GIMP >.> can you help me?
x-seoulmate #5
aww, thank you for making another one. :D
m0zarts0nata-- #6
please read the last chapter T.T
x-seoulmate #7
i love the tutorials here. ♡
oh-raindrop #8
keke, i subbed xD
even though it's close, but i like to tutorials c:
clearlee
#9
this is good