Breathless (HIATUS)

Description

In which Jongin suffers from a severe heart condition that affects his entire life in some way or another and he's trying to avoid every damn thing that sets his heart racing, which could be fatal, but Kyungsoo is always around.

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Kim Jongin, born January 14, 1994 with a severe heart condition that brings concern almost 24/7, 365 days a year. Kim Jongin, a boy that grew up in hospital beds with numerous medications and the excessive, just wants to be normal. He would never know what its like to run the fastest, to jump the highest, to lift the most' to do the best at anything. That's why he's watching Do Kyungsoo on the field any chance he gets. He isn't the best player but Kyungsoo tries his hardest. And that's just what Jongin likes.

Foreword

Making this because I don't know how to finish stories before starting new ones.

 

**loosely based off Aoki Kotomi's manga Boku no Hatsukoi o Kimi Ni Sasagu/"I Give My First Love to You"

If by any chance anything in this story is similiar to another fanfiction it is purely coincidental!

I want to thank Spotlight Posters for creating a wonderful poster and a beautiful background for my story! You can find them here!

Update maybe once a month (I'm a full time student)

sweetsoo
bad headache but i have time to start chapter 13 and maybe? finish it?

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laysneck
#1
Chapter 13: AAAH i'm so sad about chanyeol :( i hope he'll be okay but i have a feeling something may go awry. it's really exciting to see the plot thicken with each chapter, i'm eagerly waiting for more!!
supernaturel
#2
Chapter 12: Well I was expecting smtg like that. But after donor paper yeah absolutly yeol will give his heart to jongin. Poor him :((( and all fault belongs to jongdae -_- cant wait for new chapter~
bugarungus
#3
How does this not have more subscribers? Seriously, this is amazing and deserves way more love.
kaisoo-trash
#4
Chapter 11: Thank you for updating! Waiting for the next chapter~
hanah2212
#5
Chapter 8: Omaigod. Baek and Chanyeol are dating each other for four months? Heol totally unexpected.
laysneck
#6
Chapter 7: i really liked this chapter. you could feel jongin's pure resentment towards jongdae in the cafeteria scene; your writing and the emotions within it really reaches out and grabs the readers. it's really nice to see the relationship building between kyungsoo and jongin, and perhaps falling between jongin and chanyeol (?) i'm excited to see. excellent work as always!
illuvionist #7
Chapter 7: its okay..i like it...
more kaisoo moment...huhu...
i like the plot...interesting...
laysneck
#8
Chapter 6: this story is amazing!
Sagaxsuga #9
Chapter 6: I hope you make jongdae suffer because what he did to chanyeol cant be forgiven easy - btw i really like this story. Looking forward 2 next chapter :)
minnit
#10
Chapter 5: OMG! What a story
god this story is freaking me out of the world :):D:P