chaos

The Red Shoes

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Panic is unavoidable now. The people in the area where the roofing came down sputter away from the place, running into others, blocking the aisles. I can’t see very far because there’s a strong spotlight on us. But things are getting out of hand down there.

One of the security guys at the foot of the stage-ramp calls out to Jjong who is closest.

“Get down here, we’ll funnel you out.”

“I’m not going anywhere”, Jjong shouts, “get the people outta here, we’ll stay with Taemin.”

He throws a quick glance around at us and we’re all in, of course.

The security guy disappears.

The thundering dubstep continues. It’s not any song we know, just the beat with a random melody-line, like an electronic sample created by a computer. Taemin keeps moving but he looks totally lost. I guess we all feel the same, this is a freaking nightmare.

Minho still talks to the crowd or rather shouts over the music trying to calm people down.

I turn around to Kibum. He is staring at Taemin’s feet and when I look I see the red light has changed to green.

“I guess it’s safe as long as it’s green”, he shouts, then points towards the ceiling “that camera isn’t supposed to be there. I bet he’s watching us.”

I look up and he’s right. There’s a camera I haven’t seen during rehearsal.

Our guitar-player comes running towards us from the main stage. There’s a commotion down there too.

“We have at least two bombs tied to the scaffolding above the stage”, he yells, “there might be more backstage though.”

“Take the guys and get out of here”, Jonghyun shouts back, “just take the entire staff out, everyone backstage. Leave as fast as you can.”

The man hesitates and I almost smile. They are so loyal.

“MOVE”, Jjong yells but I can see he’s also touched.

The guy nods slightly then turns to run back when the music suddenly stops. Immediately I look at Taemin’s feet again. He has stopped dancing but keeps treading from one foot to the other nervously staring down at his shoes.

The panicking crowd is unaffected by the change. Everyone is trying to get to the exits, only a few people mainly the younger ones it seems are bravely listening to Minho who keeps talking unfazed by the chaos.

“Stand by”, Kibum says grabbing Taemin’s arm. The lights on Tae’s shoes are blinking again, this time in yellow. “Stand by”, Key repeats, “he’s changing tracks.”

And he’s right. A new sample starts, different beat, something like a waltz or ... I’m not sure.

“Six-eight times!” Kibum shouts, “he changed the beat, Taem.”

Taemin struggles to get into the rhythm but the blinking lights have turned red again and he’s almost panicking. When he makes an off-beat step there’s another detonation.

“I can’t do this!” He’s desperately looking around for help. I want to but I’m confused. There are people dying down there. The crowd is out of hand now. I see security overwhelmed by people trying to escape. But the exits seem to be blocked.

“Dance, Taemin, please!” Jjong shouts pleadingly, “dance before another one blows up.”

“Five, six, seven, eight ...” Kibums hoarse voice counts the beat over the microphone. He has come forward and starts an easy-going house step. After a second of hesitation Taemin follows, led by his Hyung’s pinpointed announcement, moving with him, sharing the burden ... calming down.

The lights turn green again.

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bella0203
#1
I can't believe I've just found your story now! already finished reading all your story and I love them all
this one is my favorite, I really like taekey as my favorite ship and I can totally imagine kibum would do anything to save taemin
I love the way you wrote and potrayed all members. thank you so much for making this! I hope someday you'll write something like this again :)
aoajisai #2
Chapter 28: I really can't express how much I love this story. Thank you, author-nim for writing this wonderful story. The way you've captured their personalities, their bond...it's just too real.

I have a habit of observing people and what you've written here, what you've said on your thoughts about Key and the members, I've noticed that too. I hope that more and more fans would try to go beyond the visuals and persona being projected to the public. (This goes for any fandom and idols.) To try to understand SHINee better and support each one of them and their activities. To try and separate delusions from reality. Break free from the "Perfect Illusion" (as Lady Gaga would have said it).

I hope nothing like this or something similar happens in the future for SHINee or any idol group. May they be saved from psychotic fans or haters.

Continue writing author-nim! I'd love to read more of your stories. Gambatte!
sonnet_sartori #3
Chapter 28: *-*
i cannot thank you enough for writing this.
the way you wrote the story... your portayal of kibum and taemin..
i cried. i cried like a baby ;_;
my life is super busy.. super chaotic.. super stressing.. to the point that i hate it; but this story took me away from the mess for a bit; thank you for that <3 the plot kept me on my toes! it had me on the edge of my seat *-*
arrghhh i just love this so much :')
KimHaeRa
#4
Chapter 28: This story is really something,you made it look so real. It's really good!
bluestormysky
#5
Chapter 28: Good story, great job authornim
dibidibidis27 #6
Chapter 28: This story is so good. Honestly I really don't like reading fanfics, but I got bored and tried reading one, and yeah I stumbled upon this story, and I fell inlove with this story right away. I can't explain or even put into words how much this story moved and amazed me. Anyways I need to say this, thank you for this amazing story.
MissLocket #7
Chapter 28: Chapter 28: I have to thank you again so much for this amazing story. I enjoyed every moment even if I was scared to keep reading. About Key, I am one of your fans of the roles you had given Key till now because I believe as you that Kibum is a special person, he has something like an inner strenght and clean aura that attracts me in a very particular way. He is the one and only artist I would like to meet and become his friend. I find him extremely smart, interesting, sweet but not too sweet, and more. That's why I like your story so much, because you can put on words how I really think he is. Please keep doing that.
Abhirami #8
Chapter 28: This was a well written story and I enjoyed reading it. I'm an ELF but I like SHINee a lot so here I am. All the things you said about Key I think are really true. He is one of the most interesting person I have ever seen.
Jimmae #9
Chapter 28: I love you. Thank you. :-)