fate

The Red Shoes

Thank you for still reading and commenting. Sorry this is a short chapter but we're getting there :)

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“ing talk to me!” Kibum huffs into his headset while leading Taemin through a make-shift version of the Sherlock-choreographie. I don’t know how he does it but he seems to be able to make out the crucial steps of the routine that are sufficient to prevent another detonation.

“Jjonggie, damnit!”

Jonghyun looks at Song and Moon for approval but then just grabs the microphone and shouts:

“They need more time ... can you go for a little longer?”

We watch Kibum and Taemin exchange glances.

“How much longer?” Key asks back.

Jjong hesitates then takes a deep breath and says:

“An hour.”

The music stops in time for Kibum to go ballistic:

“ARE YOU ING KIDDING ME?” he yells, “HE’S DANCED A MARATHON ALREADY!”

‘So have you’, I automatically think.

Moon takes the microphone from Jonghyun:

“This is Moon, head of bomb-squad. I can’t yet officially give up the stadium; we need permission from the Ministry. We’ll keep working on the bombs as long as you can go. When you give up, we’ll all retreat and let it blow up.”

I wonder once again if it’s wise to broadcast the plan for everyone to listen in when we hear:

“MR. MOON!” accompanied by a taunting snicker, “WHAT A PATHETIC PLAN. DO YOU REALLY THINK THAT BOY CAN JUST WALK OUT OF HERE?”

“What’s he talking about?” Minho and I ask in unison.

“THE SECOND HE LEAVES THE CENTER-STAGE THE EXPLOSIVE CHARGES IN HIS SHOES ARE TRIGGERED ...”

“Wait, wait ...” Jonghyun rips the microphone away from Moon, “wait ... let’s talk ...”

“... DON’T WORRY, HE WON’T FEEL ANYTHING. HE’LL JUST BE BLOWN TO SMITHEREENS. NO NEED FOR A FUNERAL AFTERWARDS. THERE WON’T BE ANYTHING LEFT.”

We’re dumbfounded.

“I was afraid he would have installed something like that”, Moon admits, “I just didn’t want to tempt fate.”

“So it’s true what he says?” Jjong asks, “Taemin can’t leave until you have disarmed all the bombs?”

“He probably can’t leave at all”, Moon answers darkly, “the bomber wants him dead.”

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bella0203
#1
I can't believe I've just found your story now! already finished reading all your story and I love them all
this one is my favorite, I really like taekey as my favorite ship and I can totally imagine kibum would do anything to save taemin
I love the way you wrote and potrayed all members. thank you so much for making this! I hope someday you'll write something like this again :)
aoajisai #2
Chapter 28: I really can't express how much I love this story. Thank you, author-nim for writing this wonderful story. The way you've captured their personalities, their bond...it's just too real.

I have a habit of observing people and what you've written here, what you've said on your thoughts about Key and the members, I've noticed that too. I hope that more and more fans would try to go beyond the visuals and persona being projected to the public. (This goes for any fandom and idols.) To try to understand SHINee better and support each one of them and their activities. To try and separate delusions from reality. Break free from the "Perfect Illusion" (as Lady Gaga would have said it).

I hope nothing like this or something similar happens in the future for SHINee or any idol group. May they be saved from psychotic fans or haters.

Continue writing author-nim! I'd love to read more of your stories. Gambatte!
sonnet_sartori #3
Chapter 28: *-*
i cannot thank you enough for writing this.
the way you wrote the story... your portayal of kibum and taemin..
i cried. i cried like a baby ;_;
my life is super busy.. super chaotic.. super stressing.. to the point that i hate it; but this story took me away from the mess for a bit; thank you for that <3 the plot kept me on my toes! it had me on the edge of my seat *-*
arrghhh i just love this so much :')
KimHaeRa
#4
Chapter 28: This story is really something,you made it look so real. It's really good!
bluestormysky
#5
Chapter 28: Good story, great job authornim
dibidibidis27 #6
Chapter 28: This story is so good. Honestly I really don't like reading fanfics, but I got bored and tried reading one, and yeah I stumbled upon this story, and I fell inlove with this story right away. I can't explain or even put into words how much this story moved and amazed me. Anyways I need to say this, thank you for this amazing story.
MissLocket #7
Chapter 28: Chapter 28: I have to thank you again so much for this amazing story. I enjoyed every moment even if I was scared to keep reading. About Key, I am one of your fans of the roles you had given Key till now because I believe as you that Kibum is a special person, he has something like an inner strenght and clean aura that attracts me in a very particular way. He is the one and only artist I would like to meet and become his friend. I find him extremely smart, interesting, sweet but not too sweet, and more. That's why I like your story so much, because you can put on words how I really think he is. Please keep doing that.
Abhirami #8
Chapter 28: This was a well written story and I enjoyed reading it. I'm an ELF but I like SHINee a lot so here I am. All the things you said about Key I think are really true. He is one of the most interesting person I have ever seen.
Jimmae #9
Chapter 28: I love you. Thank you. :-)