waking....?

Noona look at me

Chansoo's Point of view 

'are we nearly there yet?' i here ricky ask minsoo

minsoo frowned and lost his temper 'ya! how many times have i said when we get to the hospital we get there!' 

'Ya minsoo keep your tone down' i sad equally as angry 

he looked at me furiously but when he saw my serious face he stopped and smiled, i smiled back, we were being cheesy

ricky made gagging noises and minsoo chuckled 'your just jealous' he said accidently and rickys face dropped into a sulk, i looked at minsoo sternly and turned to ricky 'just ignore him' i said while smiling sweetly

he nodded sadly 'she'll wake up soon, i know she will'

and the rest of the ride was awkward. when we got to the hospitsal me and minsoo decided to leave ricky alone with ~~~~~~ as per usual.

no-ones P.O.V

Ricky sat down beside you and caressed you cheek, his eyes began tear up slighlty but he held them back

'aahhh noona, without you i cant argue with chansoo and have couple wars! you have to wake up already so we can stop minsoo hyung and chansoo noona from stealing our spot' he said whilst chuckling lighlty 'Nooooooooooooona' he said in a sing-a-song voice 'i miss you' he lenat in and kissed your soft lips. he sat back down and stared at you he held your hand tightly whilest humming an unknown tune.

Your P.O.V

-a voice.....a beautiful voice...Ricky....*

you felt a slight pressure on your lips, you smiled on the inside knowing that ricky was kissing you..but your happiness didnt last long as you felt a stinging pain in your head *when will this torture end* you sobbed inside, knowing that there was no way that anyone could see how you felt...you knew you were in a coma....all you could see was darkness and the only time there was light was when you could hear ricky's voice...when you could feel his hand on yours.

you lay in your thoughts and you felt his hand on yours * i want to hold him* you felt a sharp pain run down your spin and into your arms as you gathered up the strength to hold him 

you felt your fingers flex and you squeezed weakly onto his hands 

No ones P.O.V

your hand squeezed rickys ever so lightly, ricky stopped humming and looked down at his hands confused

'noona' he said sofetly 'noona are...are you waking up' he looked at you desperately 

he waited a couple of minutes but felt nothing

'araso noona, but im sure i didnt imagine that' he smiled sweetly 'i'll wait!''

and he sat back down and resumed his humming 


^o^ hellooooooooooooooooooooooo

are you going to wake up? or are you staying in a coma?............. continue to read and you'll find out ; )

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LuckyMend_97 #1
Chapter 37: I loved it!!! ^.^ Ricky is too cute >///< and the end made me laugh a lot xD Minsoo is such a noisy boy haha
lilshocker8
#2
Chapter 33: That text conversation made me giggle. Ricky, you're adorable ^^
iamthestalker
#3
Best Ricky fanfic ever <3
Authornim! You're the best! ^-^
claribelmiranda #4
Chapter 37: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww......what a nice reconciliation it is :) kekekekeek
leehazaini #5
Chapter 37: hi! I'm new here.. I mean, I'm new to fanfiction.. Sooo, this story was great!! Is it too late to comment? Hehe! ;)
jungrio
#6
Rereading this 'cause miss and love this.

"'Umma we're leaving' you shouted but didnt hear a reply. Aish she must have fallen asleep again." but forever laughing at that part because my mom is like that irl omfg all she does is sleep.
OnlyForYa
#7
THE ENDING? ;_;

This fic was so great. Thank you <3
changhyun #8
Gkjbdkjznns noooo the end already?? ; ;
gonna miss this <333