Chapter 8

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: Silver Lining

Author: SJsuperholic

Tags: fantasy, romance, supernatural, you, exo, kai

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

Recommended by: Memorize

Status: On-going

Description: In which a young woman, afflicted with overwhelming, moves into a new town in hopes of refreshing her outlook on the world. However, as she begins to explore her new home, a mysterious visitor of the night lures her into a new world with fears and afflictions all it's own.

 

My thoughts: For such a short description it really hooked me. Now there is only three chapters as I'm currently typing this, but they're good chapters, really good chapters. Now there was one or two typos but, everyone is human and no one is perfect, not even me. Now it's hard to write down my thoughts on something when there is only a couple chapters, but I can feel that this is going to be good in future chapters. In, my opinion the vocabulary is very good, something one of my English teachers might like. It...... makes me want another updates, like right now. And it's not what we usually see with a supernatural exo tag. Most of the ones I've found are where Exo are wolves, now I'm not hating on those, I love wolves all the wa

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MarryM #1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta #2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize #3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize #5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.
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