Chapter 10

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: Spirt of the Wolf: Claimed

Author: RinnieDuhBunny

Tags: fantasy, romance, werewolves, exo, kai, kimjongin

Characters: Byun BaekMi (OC), Kim Jongin/Kai, Exo, and more

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/788340/spirit-of-the-wolf-claimed-fantasy-romance-werewolves-exo-kai-kimjongin

Status: On-going, Subscribers Only

Description: When in this story, Little Red-Riding Hood turns into The Big Bad Wolf. Wolves are always the villians in the stories. Everybody knows villians never get happy endings.

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"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR BAEKMI! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!" They started cheering as soon as I blew the 4 candles with one blow. It was the perfect birthday celebration with both of my parents and my elder brother. Or I thought it was.

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"BRING HER TO THE EMERGENCY ROOM!"   

"I don't know if she can make it. She's losing a lot of blood!"

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"Oppa! You are hurt! Get your oo treated!" 

"No, it's okay, Mimi." 

"Oppa, what if the oo can make you like omma? I don't want that to happen to you!" 

"It won't happen to me Mimi, I promise.

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"IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU'RE THE REASON WHY SHE'S GONE!" 

  "A-Appa..." 

"No. I'm not your father anymore." 

"APPA STOP IT!"

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"Is this the police? I think you might want to see this."

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The lights turn on

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MarryM #1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta #2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize #3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize #5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.
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