Chapter 3

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: Dear You

Author: crystal_clover

Tags: fluff, romance, exo, exok, lay, joonmyun, suho

Characters: Suho, OC, and all other members of EXO

Status: Complete

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/458152/dear-you-fluff-romance-exo-exok-lay-joonmyun-suho

Description: When you feel something, there will always be another time when you can relive it. But when you inscribe in on paper, it will last forever. Aeri has always relied on her diary to listen to her secrets. Within its pages were her joys and her sorrows, her fears and her devastation. But what happens when she gains a new confidant? One who is able to give words of wisdom rather than the one who only mutely listens?

I just finished reading this a little while ago and I absolutly love it. What makes it a real seller for me is it is a Suho fic, which there aren't enough of and our leader needs more love than that. This is by far one of my favorite stories. I had it finished so quickly, it amazed me. And you are given enough hints to figure out who her secret writer is like chapters before the OC actually does. It was just great, I don't know how to describe it. The OC is a friend of Chanyeol's and where it would be fun to

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MarryM
#1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta
#2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize
#3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize
#5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.