Chapter 4

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: Deer Luhan, With Love

Authors: Korekrypta and get2herheart

Tags: comedy, genderbender, originalcharacter, exo, sehun, humor, crack

Characters: EXO, Sehun, OC

Status: Subscribers-only, Members-only, Complete

Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/726312/deer-luhan-with-love-comedy-genderbender-originalcharacter-exo-sehun-humor-crack

Description: A case of dyed pink hair, an argument with la madre, and a freak encounter with an EXO member in the park after being hit in the head by a plate find Leigh Lee on a plane to Seoul the next day, with little recollection of how she got there and EXO's maknae intent on calling her hyung. She's also clutching Luhan's passport, missing her own, and widely mistaken as the second oldest boy in the group when she doesn't speak a word of Chinese. And to make matters worse, Luhan's happily walzed off to China-- without permission and with Leigh's phone-- and expects her to fill in for him without being caught while he tries to hunt down the Mafia.

"It won't be for long," he said.

He needed a new dictionary.

 

I love this one, just totally love it. There are so many puns, it had me crying I was laughing so hard. I would deliberately re-read a chapter because I loved it so much. It wasn't what I

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MarryM #1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta #2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize #3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize #5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.
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