Chapter 11

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: The Heiress

Author: AnnieWilson

Tags:drama, exo, kai, sehun, bap, teenromance, vixx

Characters: Penelope Park (OC), Kim Jongin (Kai), Sehun, rest of EXO, Hakyeon and the rest of VIXX, Junhong and the rest of BAP, Some other OCs

Status: Complete, Subscribers-Only

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/826061/the-heiress-angst-exo-kai-sehun-bap-teenromance-vixx

Description: The tale of a rich girl falling for a poor boy. Penelope Park is the heiress to her father's multinational, multibillion oil and gas company, PetroPark. She lives the life anyone could wish for: perfect grades, a perfect house, money and a boyfriend everyone wants. Then, Kim Jongin enters her life and everything she thinks she knows and wants is challanged by the handsome, facsinating boy.

"What do you even see in him?"

 

"Everything"

 

This story isn't what you think it's going to be, trust me, I was even suprised by it. It feels like there is several stories in this one story. And it's a good thing. It's almost like you're the one experiencing everything. The story is so well put together, that it blows my mind. At first I was alittle hesitant to read this the first time, and I don't know why. I shouldn't have been. The character development and

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MarryM #1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta #2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize #3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize #5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.
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