Chapter 7

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: Growl

Author: Skyler_blue

Tags: Action, Romance, you, exo, kai, chanyeol, thill

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/516010/growl-action-romance-you-exo-kai-chanyeol-thrill

Status: On-going

Description: Disguising yourself as a boy shouldn't be so hard. But add a life-threatinging tournament, a team of hot-tempered delinquents and an older brother with a secret? School just got a lot more difficult. You're willing to do anything in order for your older brother to stay alive. Anything. Even if that means disguising as a guy and entering the famous life-threatening boys-only competition for the prize money.  Sounds simple, right? Not when you classmates are delinquents.  And not when some of these delinquents want to slit each other's throats. Will they trust you? Or will everything fall apart when they know your secret? There's only one way to find out...Let them hear how loud you can Growl...

I love this story, it's intrested me since I saw it featured. Yes, featured, I know I'm taking the easy way out, but 1) this story deserves it and 2) I've been busy all summer and I felt like I neglected everyone. Anyways when I started it it reminded me of the Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins, but was I surprised when I found out that it just gave of that feeling in the first chapter or two

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MarryM
#1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta
#2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize
#3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize
#5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.