Chapter 13

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: On Ebb

Author: Korekrypta & get2herheart

Tags: fantasy, romance, exo, sehun, chen, jongdae,mamaverse

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Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/762728/on-ebb-fantasy-romance-exo-sehun-chen-jongdae-mamaverse

Description: Sehun thinks he's got his hands full when his best friend, the princess of Exoplanet, has her memories wiped for the seventh time in an attempt to curb her volatile magical powers. But that's nothing compared to when the palace is attacked by a mysterious cult of people whose symbol is a tattoo of a red eye and the queen's last request is for him to protect the princess' favourite half-plant and enroll her into a magica school whn he can't use magic himself and proximity with magic is in danger of triggering Priness Gaia's powers.

Down Under, in Endoplanet, things aren't much better. When Xiumin and Chen discover a frozen body in the school grounds, Chen knows this mean he's goig to be assigned o the special Guardians and be forced to face up to his worse fear: using his lightning powers for violence. But with the army out f the picture, technology all over the land shutting down and the Red Eye tribe on the rampage, here's little choice. Everybody's safety rest on three things: the tactical mind of the school's youngest boardig rector, the timimg of the ebb and flow of powers for

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MarryM #1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta #2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize #3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize #5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.
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