Chapter 9

My Recommendations for Exo Fanfics
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Title: It Only Goes On From Here

Author: CrystalSnow26 and TaoRis4Life2

Tags: mgreg, exo, hunhan, taoris, baekyeol, kaisoo, sulay

Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1000144/it-only-goes-on-from-here-mpreg-exo-hunhan-taoris-baekyeol-kaisoo-sulay

Recommened by: kimbummie5

Status: On-Going

 

Description: Kris is a selfish and arrogant rich man who can be hard to understand. Tao is a college student who is struggling to survive on his own. Tao was in an accident and is found, passed out, on the side of the road by Kris' best friend and personal assistant, Kai. Kai and Tao become friends instantly and when Kai met Tao's best friend, Kyungsoo, he fell in love. Kai invited Tao, Kyungsoo and all of his friends other friends, Baekhyun, Lay, Luhan and Xiumin to a sudden party for Kai decided to try and fix his friends, Chanyeol, Suho, Sehun, Chen and Kris up with Tao and his friends. Kris only met Tao once and had never heard of any of his friends, but Kai came home and told Kris he was going to be hosting a party and urged Kris to stay. Kai's parties always meant hot girls and expensive drinks, but what he didn't know was this wasn't the average party Kai would host and what happened that night changed Kris' life forever.

My thoughts: I..... enjoyed this. I really did. I read it in maybe 2 hours? Now I've read one other Taoris story and that one was more depressing. I ship this ship, a lot, almost as m

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MarryM #1
Son of the Coldness
by MarryM
www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057666

it's one of my own one shots featuring Chen as the main male character and it includes different genres; and it's enjoyable to read from what I've heard from some readers.
Hope you'll check it out and like it as well ;)
Korekrypta #2
Chapter 15: OMG, how have I only just realised that you put On Ebb on here? Thank you so much ;_; And I hope everything's going well for you and that you've recovered from whatever was troubling you.
Memorize #3
Chapter 12: The snippet of the story your writing definitely has potential, but the spacing and grammatical errors in this piece stand out the most. You switched from past tense to present tense to past tense again, so be careful! Also, when someone is having a dialogue, they should have a separate line for themselves, and it continues until a different person/scene is introduced.

"If you would just hold the flashlight still I could probably figure out what is wrong and get us out of here.” I say as calm as I can.

Notice how you put the period at the end, but it's actually supposed to be a comma!

http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html

But if the person is doing an action after their dialogue, then it's supposed to be a period.

Hope that helps! :D
Exokayla #4
Hey I love your recommendations, your a/n's are really funny and make me want to read these stories. I'm new here, so it's good to have someone to recommend stories to me. You should totally try writing, you definitely would make an entertaining author, maybe we can co-write together? I'm not extremely familiar with EXO, because I'm a new fan, but I really want to write a fanfic with them in it. So let me know okay?
Memorize #5
Silver Lining by SJsuperholic
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/910069/silver-lining-fantasy-romance-supernatural-you-exo-kai

One of my favorite Kai fics even though it's not completed. The use of the author's vocabulary enhances the story so much! You should definitely check out her other fics :) All Exo-centric

Where He Waits by optimus-unreal
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/902211/where-he-waits-angst-drama-romance-exo-chanyeol-kyungsoo
Made me cry. Maybe it's because I'm a softie, haha.
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