kimcheeese's Turn-Offs.

Description

-Hey you,

Ever wondered why your fanfiction is lacking subscribers and viewers? Well, perhaps it's because your fanfiction is a major turn-off to many readers.

You may be wondering what these turn-offs are, well, I, kimcheeese is here to tell you what turns me off when I read a story.

-kimcheeese.

Remember, this is my personal opinion. Some readers might think differently, so no bashing, okay? Oh, and I'm not perfect either, so I make mistakes here and there. Don't expect too much from me. Also, keep in mind that I'm not trying to teach or tell you guys what to do and what not to do when writing your story, but I do hope that this will help.

Foreword

-How this works; 

Basically in every chapter, I will write one turn-off I find in stories along with a little description and perhaps even an example. Simple enough?

-note;

Yes, I'm aware that this is a stupid title. I'm not a creative person, so everything you guys read will probably put you guys to sleep. (:

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mysoulisstarving #1
Chapter 5: LOL.., omg I had a "you" story even with the feature of changing the name with the reader's username and I regret it now..,but yeah, you are funny... "according to his ..." LOL
Yoruclaw #2
Chapter 14: oh please update. this is truly the best.
Yoruclaw #3
Chapter 7: ive read a story like that, but i enjoy the author being part of the story. its like theyre a character in it.
Yoruclaw #4
Chapter 5: :( fine then~ but the male one was really funny
Yoruclaw #5
Chapter 4: ikr! It gets so annoying! like, seriously people?its a waste of time reading and writing and i only wanna read it in the story.
Yoruclaw #6
Chapter 1: You are really funny. You make me laugh my head off.
Lollie #7
Chapter 12: GOD. YOU READ MY MIND. These are absolutely things that turn me off when reading ffs. Sometimes the stories are amazing but these are just major turnoff.
ForeverRainbow #8
Hahah great help and fun to read as well (:
SuperShineKissBeast #9
I read this to get some tips on my writing style, but ended up using this as a referrence when editing my story! Haha. These tips were blunt and honest. Thanks!
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