Someone Always Said (LuNew)

Scrabbling Feelings
hey hey:D i got a lot to explain about this fic ahaha.
My friend told me about her style of writing (which is
eaxctly like the one below).
She takes the whole day writing little paragraphs every two hours.
Each paragraph has an idea of their own
& at the end you have to come up with a similar meaning.
I tried it, and im actually
really happy with how it turned out for some reason.
I found it pretty fun. The time on each paragraph really
isn't necesarry, but i wanted to give you the idea
of what time of the day i wrote it in.
&&finally the last part was based on SHINee's random
water fight at one of their concerts (here)
couldnt helpt but put it in, hope you like:D

 

 

 

10:00 AM:
Her piercing vocals rang throughout the enclosed room. The convincing rasping in
her high notes, disguising the searing pain inching closer and closer every time
she struggles to gulp. Her eyes close in what appears to be devotion; but is
obvious frustration in his observing eyes.
The music halts, and she's left breathless. Knees buckled, stomach tight, and
teary eyes. The spectators clap, commenting her on the almost touchable and
obvious emotion she portrays. Luna smiles, and Onew frowns. Someone always said
fake smiles were a deadly disease.

12:00 PM:
The crowd joins in the contagious laughter. He stumbles towards the table,
flustered every time his legs seem to fail him. The chuckles erupt as he trips
and lands head first on the table. His upper body is sprawled over the solid
surface, chest wincing when feeling the several pats of humor. He purses his
lips, swallows his pride, and plasters a goofy grin over his face. The grin
doesn't fool her though. As she swallows her water with difficulty she sends him
a supportive glance. He pretends to not catch it, snapping his head towards the
members with immense speed. Onew pretends and Luna hopes. Someone always said
you can find at least one supportive soul in a crowd of many.

2:00 PM
She hugs her unnie, salty water forming in the side of her eyes. Amber hugs her
back, both their eyes squeezing with contentment. As elder pulls away, she
winces. He notices the reluctance when she pulls away and steps to the side.
The fear of her leaving again, glimmered in her eyes. She furrows her eyebrows
in confusion; a brilliant way to suppress tears. Maybe her abandonment issues
weren't to be revealed, but he could see past her facade. Luna sniffles and Onew
watches with agony. Someone always said there's always one person whose willing to
help you, its your choice to let them.

4:00 PM:
He burns hole in the same spot, which the collision occurred. The red bruise lay
palpably on his soft skin. The way Jonghyun's palm fell on his hand made him
wince. The accusing glare from the singer when Onew offered to help him up;
flooding the crevices in his mind. He felt as though s didn't find
him as a feeble leader. Sure Jonghyun's egotistical pride, and horrible mood
caused the action. However; that just fed the rejection enveloping Jinki into a
bubble. Luna tilted her head with compassion, while signaling him. This time,
Onew turned his head in her direction. She lipped something along the lines of
"they love you, no mater what", while retreating towards her practice room. Onew
nods confidently, a thank in debt and Luna gleams with encouragement. Someone
always said having others help you, is like helping yourself.

6:00 PM:
She plucks her earphones out, curling her hands over the bottle. She pops the
cap open, and slugs one enormous gulp. The bulge formed in ,
softens when interacting with the cold. A sigh escapes her, lips never leaving
the nozzle. Her eyes widen, water, spewing our . The coughs were impossible to
restrain, muffling her sense of hearing. When she shifted in her seat, a hand
was shoved in her face. She noticed the neatly wrapped candy placed on the palm.
The hand nudged and she swiped quickly. Luna looked up, to find Onew's back
facing her. She shrugged, letting out several more coughs and twirling the candy
in her fingers. She popped it in , watching the elder walk away, and
grimacing on the taste. Not candy,
but cough drops. Her eyes caught sight of the message in the wrapper.
"Don't stress yourself, kid". Luna smirked, Onew was no longer in debt. Someone
always said the wonders of little thoughts can get you places.

8:00PM:
The crowd roared as Jonghyun’s voice rang through the stadium. The base boomed,
each and every member able to feel the vibrations in the pit of his chest. Onew
squinted towards the front, eyes compelling. It stretched for yards, seats
flooded with cheering fans. These people adored Lee Jinki, and he  adored them.
Suddenly, a sensation sparked in his face. The water dripped from his cheeks and
hair, as well as from the culprits water bottle. He choked ob the splashed
water, attempting to hold back his chuckles. He grabbed a water bottle of his
own, crushing the cap open with his teeth. Onew sprinted across the stage,
flicking the liquid everywhere. He seized at the front of the stage, a fresh new
water bottle in his hand. He could hear the chanting of "Onew", inflating his pride
even more.
He hears a sweet voice; a familiar voice.; her voice. He ducks down avoiding,
Taemin's chucked water bottle while glancing. Luna smiles, pointing to her
shirt. He notices the Onew colored in with red sharpie and the word oppa
scribbled at the bottom. His heart skips a beat, regaining composure when he
sees her slight cough. Onew tosses the unopened water bottle into the crowd,
retreating into the battlefield without ammo. But not before politely yelling "I
love you" to the fans; one in particular. Onew looks for shelter and Luna stares
at the water bottle. Someone always said, adoring is the next step; the next step
to something bigger, and maybe better.

10:00 PM:
Luna stumbled backstage, people whipping past her left and right. She finally
catches sight of the enormous amount of wet people. She laughs when noticing
Jonghyun shake his head to rid the water, like the puppy he is.
A body bumps into him, apologizing immediately. Onew, bowed his wet hair sticking
to his face.
"You were great out there", she says.
"Thanks', he replies flustered.
"Thanks for the water bottle", she sticks her hand out, revealing the empty
water bottle safely suspended from her tight fingers.
"Thanks for the support", he points at her shirt, glancing down to disguise his
blushing cheeks.
"Can't you guys do anything besides thank each other?” Amber scoffs. Onew (in
self defense) wraps his arms around Luna's waist. Luna pecks him on the cheek,
content seeing the smug smile disappear from the tomboys face. Instead, it was
replaced with a devilish grin.
"Boy friend and girlfriend, huh?" she muttered before walking away. Onew choked
on his saliva, Luna coughed; but no denial was mentioned. Someone always said, when
you don't deny, it must be, true. True it was.

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ILovePikachu2
#1
Chapter 5: Ahhh this was cute!!! I really love your JongNa one shots a lot!!!! Both this one and the chapter 11 one!!!
ILovePikachu2
#2
Chapter 11: MY JONGNA FEELS EXPLODED <3 <3
MyNameIsEJ
#3
Chapter 15: The LuNew one was cleverly written, I say. And the MinStal ones were the sweetest. I hope you can write more LuNew in the future!
PinkCookie
#4
update soon
tarepanda
#5
best set of drabbles/oneshots I have ever read <3 I love all your drabbles, especially TaeLli/SulTae<3
aliciawhcy
#6
I love Taelli One ^^
irawrkey #7
i have to catch up with this one =)
makeashake #8
Loved these drabbles! Keyber is my otp for Amber, but i surprisingly really enjoyed the Jongber one. I also really loved your Jongna ones. They're too cute! All in all, great job :D Your style of writing is really enjoyable.
kitten83
#9
Jongber??nice..finally another fic wit amber n another person instead of key..lol..
StrawberryFantasy
#10
Awesome, an update! :D<br />
Hehe, great chapter too~<br />