New Beginning

More Than Romance | HIATUS
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Rina's POV

 

The books that surrounded me were calling to me saying “Read me, read me.” I was enthralled by all the books that I could be reading, I WILL be reading. Although one would say I am wasting my vacation by just going to another country to enjoy its bookstores and food.

 

“You're young, Rina. Go out and party! Club it out! Or visit tourist spots, girl!” one of my friends would tell me.

 

Well, I would rather “waste” my time reading away than drive to all the tourist spots California has to offer me or go clubbing. Oh, the energy that requires, I don't have it. Plus I already accomplished that when I was younger, and there is no fun in doing those things by yourself. I sighed as I sat down, with my new book, The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho, in the cafe area of Barnes and Nobles. Some alone time, away from Italy, and away from Korea. The places I have gone to since Jay and I broke up, I dare say he'd be proud of me and my new acquired independence.

 

“Paulo Coelho, good choice,” a man's voice said.

 

I looked up to find quite an attractive young man, around my age, I'd say. How does he know I'm Korean? 

 

“He is a favorite of mine,” I told him

 

“Mind if I sit down?” he asked

 

“Not at all,” I smiled

 

“Are you into books that talk of one finding themselves and going on journeys in doing so?”

 

He sounded quite intelligent, and might I add he has quite the smile.

 

“I very much am,”

 

“I am guessing a fine young lady like you is in search of herself then,” he noted

 

“Good guess,”

 

“And a fine young lady like you wouldn't happen to be traveling alone, would you? That's not such a smart move in this cruel cruel world,”

 

“I did or rather am traveling alone, but I have family members here,”

 

“Well then that's great news.”

 

What a strange guy, I thought. Attractive but strange--- yet appealing.

 

“So what's your name?” I managed to ask

 

“Donghae, Kim Donghae,” he smiled and offered to shake my hand

 

“Rina, Song Rina,” I gladly shook it.

 

It was nice meeting a guy who didn't come off as creepy or as a playboy. He was quite the opposite and it certainly intrigues me.

 

 

Donghae's POV

 

Of all the places to go to, why did Peter have to choose California? It's not that I hate California, but there's so many more interesting places to see that we haven't gone to. He's just here for what he calls “California girls.” I will never get why he has such a thing for them. Instead of going out again in a club, I decided to get dropped of at Barnes and Nobles although Peter teased me endlessly about it calling me a killjoy. It didn't get to me though, I was tired of going to clubs and beaches just to “see” girls. I wanted to meet new people and have real intellectual conversations, as boring as that may sound. As I opened the door to enter B&N, I spotted a girl, who looks Korean, looking excited about books. It was a cute sight to see a girl actually be excited about books. I didn't approach her right away. I decided to keep my distance and she never even noticed me once. She was so focused on picking out books to buy. She sure got a handful of them. I finally went up to her when she settled down in the cafe area.

 

“Paulo Coelho, good choice,” I told her

 

She closed her book and looked up at me.

 

“He is a favorite of mine,” she stated

 

“Mind if I sit down?” I asked

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I am so sorry about not updating this fic in such a long time. University life has been taking over me

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mistressdean
#1
Chapter 11: Well, I had thought it would be best for me to comment on this story as a whole rather than scattered my thoughts in several comments, but I just wanted to leave this comment since I'm halfway through your story:

I have to be honest. It took me over six chapters to get into your story, but I kept reading it to give you the benefit of the doubt. The several time-jumps made Jay's and Rina's lives feel like a rush, so it was difficult to enjoy these characters.

But then . . . the breakup came and a wave of emotions hit me. Great job! Up to that point, your story wasn't exactly boring, per say, but it wasn't exciting, if you get what I mean. But that's OKAY! Because your story has a nice sophistication to it :)

I think you definitely established Rina's personality and views and I'm looking forward to seeing how things go with Donghae/Damien :) I shall anticipate the future character development!
mistressdean
#2
Honest to God, that foreword got me hooked! I'll definitely read this later :)
Craycraydee #3
Chapter 17: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!!!!
Missnotsogirly24 #4
Chapter 17: Stujfdgklnvggdctgh she said yes kyaaahhh..... Please update soon ^•^
wenkie0414 #5
Chapter 17: when are they going to meet? i want it soon.. and the complications starts.. lol
jetpitchblack #6
Chapter 16: Go Damian! Rina deserve to be happy with a man that will make her shed tears of joy... Every girl inlove deserves to be happy.. Fighting!!!! kekekeke... Thanks for the update!
Craycraydee #7
Chapter 15: I think i'm still rooting for damian. Let's see in the coming chapters in what will jay do...
wenkie0414 #8
Chapter 15: i am kwonfused but i want the 2 guys fight for her.. like may the best man win.. rightt now donghae have the advantage but is rina over Jay? she hasnt seen him for a long time.. She has to faced him first before jumping into another relationship.. ☺️
Craycraydee #9
Chapter 14: Awww, jay. I know most of us have moments where we decide things we thought we want but eventually regret it in the end. I'm just worried that he would be too late if rina accepts damian's confession. I don't know whom to side anymore :(
Babysmurfette #10
Chapter 13: Please let Rina love Damian/Donghae fully. It would be really better for the good guy to win..