Strange Longing

More Than Romance | HIATUS
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-Back in Korea-

 

Author's POV

 

It was another busy and rowdy day in Seoul, but there was one lady, relaxing, enjoying her hot brewed coffee in an isolated cafe.

 

“Ah, the life of the unemployed,” she boasted before sipping her coffee

 

“You're enjoying being fired a little too much, Lulu,” Jun said over the counter

 

“Oh please. You are also enjoying it because I spend more time with you,” Luna smirked

 

“But it isn't good for our family business.”

 

Jun was cleaning the counter with a damp cloth.

 

“I never asked for the discounts. It was you that started it,” she argued

 

“It seems right to do because we are dating,”

 

“Then it should be free,”

 

“You're too much,”

 

“But you like me anyway.”

 

Jun didn't even try to argue back since he knew he would never win with Luna. She had such a strong personality.

 

“So what's that you've got there?” Jun asked as he exited from the counter

 

“Come sit with me to see,” she patted the couch.

 

Luna waited for her boyfriend to comfortably sit next to her before opening the box.

 

“It's from Ri,” Luna said while cutting through the tape

 

“Wow. How long has it been since she last sent something? A year?”

 

“I'm so excited,”

 

“Here, let me do that for you.”

 

Jun cut through all of the packing tape and opened the package. The box contained a light blue, long envelope with “For My Luna” written on it in cursive, a Chanel perfume, a light yellow notebook with music notes as its design and a brand new sign pen.

 

“She spoils you,” Jun told Luna

 

“She really does,” smiled Luna as she took the envelope out of the box

 

“Come on, open it so we can read it,” Jun nudged her

 

“You nosy person,” Luna joked

 

“I miss her too, you know,” he defended

 

“Okay, okay.”

 

Luna carefully lifted the

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I am so sorry about not updating this fic in such a long time. University life has been taking over me

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mistressdean
#1
Chapter 11: Well, I had thought it would be best for me to comment on this story as a whole rather than scattered my thoughts in several comments, but I just wanted to leave this comment since I'm halfway through your story:

I have to be honest. It took me over six chapters to get into your story, but I kept reading it to give you the benefit of the doubt. The several time-jumps made Jay's and Rina's lives feel like a rush, so it was difficult to enjoy these characters.

But then . . . the breakup came and a wave of emotions hit me. Great job! Up to that point, your story wasn't exactly boring, per say, but it wasn't exciting, if you get what I mean. But that's OKAY! Because your story has a nice sophistication to it :)

I think you definitely established Rina's personality and views and I'm looking forward to seeing how things go with Donghae/Damien :) I shall anticipate the future character development!
mistressdean
#2
Honest to God, that foreword got me hooked! I'll definitely read this later :)
Craycraydee #3
Chapter 17: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!!!!
Missnotsogirly24 #4
Chapter 17: Stujfdgklnvggdctgh she said yes kyaaahhh..... Please update soon ^•^
wenkie0414 #5
Chapter 17: when are they going to meet? i want it soon.. and the complications starts.. lol
jetpitchblack #6
Chapter 16: Go Damian! Rina deserve to be happy with a man that will make her shed tears of joy... Every girl inlove deserves to be happy.. Fighting!!!! kekekeke... Thanks for the update!
Craycraydee #7
Chapter 15: I think i'm still rooting for damian. Let's see in the coming chapters in what will jay do...
wenkie0414 #8
Chapter 15: i am kwonfused but i want the 2 guys fight for her.. like may the best man win.. rightt now donghae have the advantage but is rina over Jay? she hasnt seen him for a long time.. She has to faced him first before jumping into another relationship.. ☺️
Craycraydee #9
Chapter 14: Awww, jay. I know most of us have moments where we decide things we thought we want but eventually regret it in the end. I'm just worried that he would be too late if rina accepts damian's confession. I don't know whom to side anymore :(
Babysmurfette #10
Chapter 13: Please let Rina love Damian/Donghae fully. It would be really better for the good guy to win..