Not Alone

More Than Romance | HIATUS
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The snowflakes were slowly falling outside of young Rina's house. She desperately wanted to go out to play, but her grandmother was too cold to watch over her outside. As a result, young Rina sulked by the window. Her eyes followed the two brothers chasing each other. They were enjoying the snow day while their parents watched from their patio. It was going to be another white Christmas without Rina's parents around.

 

“God, let there be a Christmas miracle,” Rina prayed.

 

 

Rina grew up in a lonely household, being the only child of a couple that is the epitome of successful workaholics. Rina's mother, Song Maeri, is one of the top realtors in the country while her father, Song Seungo is a cardiologist. They were the most envied couple in the block, but Rina would rather name the Kwons as the best married couple. Rina grew up watching how active the Kwons were in their kids' lives, Jay and Jun. So when Rina got the chance to befriend one of them at school, she took it.

 

“Is this seat taken?” Rina asked Jay

 

“Nope,” he cheerily replied

 

“May I sit here?”

 

“Sure thing,” Jay removed his backpack from the seat

 

“Thanks,” Rina placed her tray on the table

 

“So how's your first day of high school Song?”

 

Rina was shocked by Jay's start for a conversation.

 

“It was not eventful,” she answered

 

“Same,” he slouched

 

“I didn't think you'd know me,”

 

“How can I not? You're the Song kid! Every kid in the block wants to be you or at least live your life,” Jay was getting excited

 

“But why?”

 

“Are you kidding?”

 

“No,”

 

“You are rich. Your parents are barely around. Need I say more?”

 

“I can get the first reason, the second one, I can't,” Rina said as she took a bite of her grilled cheese sandwich

 

“I wish my parents were, at least,” Jay leaned his head back on the chair

 

“But your parents are great,”

 

“That's because they're not your parents that you can say that,” he closed his eyes, “They always want to know everything,”

 

“It means they care,”

 

“You don't sound like a teenager,” Jay looked at her

 

“Is that bad?” Rina put her food down

 

“No,” he paused, “I like it,” he smiled

 

Rina was once again shocked by Jay's character, but did not show it. She continued to munch on her sandwich.

 

“You can cal

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I am so sorry about not updating this fic in such a long time. University life has been taking over me

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mistressdean
#1
Chapter 11: Well, I had thought it would be best for me to comment on this story as a whole rather than scattered my thoughts in several comments, but I just wanted to leave this comment since I'm halfway through your story:

I have to be honest. It took me over six chapters to get into your story, but I kept reading it to give you the benefit of the doubt. The several time-jumps made Jay's and Rina's lives feel like a rush, so it was difficult to enjoy these characters.

But then . . . the breakup came and a wave of emotions hit me. Great job! Up to that point, your story wasn't exactly boring, per say, but it wasn't exciting, if you get what I mean. But that's OKAY! Because your story has a nice sophistication to it :)

I think you definitely established Rina's personality and views and I'm looking forward to seeing how things go with Donghae/Damien :) I shall anticipate the future character development!
mistressdean
#2
Honest to God, that foreword got me hooked! I'll definitely read this later :)
Craycraydee #3
Chapter 17: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!!!!
Missnotsogirly24 #4
Chapter 17: Stujfdgklnvggdctgh she said yes kyaaahhh..... Please update soon ^•^
wenkie0414 #5
Chapter 17: when are they going to meet? i want it soon.. and the complications starts.. lol
jetpitchblack #6
Chapter 16: Go Damian! Rina deserve to be happy with a man that will make her shed tears of joy... Every girl inlove deserves to be happy.. Fighting!!!! kekekeke... Thanks for the update!
Craycraydee #7
Chapter 15: I think i'm still rooting for damian. Let's see in the coming chapters in what will jay do...
wenkie0414 #8
Chapter 15: i am kwonfused but i want the 2 guys fight for her.. like may the best man win.. rightt now donghae have the advantage but is rina over Jay? she hasnt seen him for a long time.. She has to faced him first before jumping into another relationship.. ☺️
Craycraydee #9
Chapter 14: Awww, jay. I know most of us have moments where we decide things we thought we want but eventually regret it in the end. I'm just worried that he would be too late if rina accepts damian's confession. I don't know whom to side anymore :(
Babysmurfette #10
Chapter 13: Please let Rina love Damian/Donghae fully. It would be really better for the good guy to win..