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More Than Romance | HIATUS
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Rina finished her last day of the school year quickly. She only had to submit her paper works and she was free to go.

“Freedom, I smell it, I feel it, ahhh~” she did a little twirl as she exited her classroom

“If other people saw that, you might think you're a little crazy.”

It was Donghae leaning his back on the wall while looking at her.

“Oh, you startled me! How long have you been there?”

Donghe shrugged his shoulders. He didn't bother to look at the time while waiting. He was just ecstatic about school being over.

“Done for the day?”

“Yup!” she did a little skip as she went towards him

“Let's go home?”

“Let's not,” giggled Rina

“Someone's hypher,”

“As if you're not happy about school being over,” Rina poked his side

“Hey,” Donghae caught her hand before she could retreat

“Heyy~”

The two were so caught up in their own world that they didn't notice Rina's professor come out of the room.

“Why look at this,” he spoke up

“Professor Smith,” the two were suddenly standing very straight and stiff

“Two of the most hardworking students in the campus, Damian and Rina. You two are quite the pair,” he commented

The two took glances at each other not knowing what to respond.

“Um, thank you, sir,” Donghae bowed

“Well you two better run along now. Vacation has begun,”

“Yes sir. Have a nice vacation,” said Rina

“To you two as well.”

Rina became a bit flustered. Donghae and I make quite the pair, Professor said.

“So where do you want to go if not home?” Donghae asked

“Huh?”

“Someone's spacing out,”

“Sorry,”

“So where should we go now?”

“Let's go to one of those American diners,” Rina finally answered

“American diners?” he sounded like he wasn't up for it

“Don't tell me you want tacos again? You make so much at home already,”

“And you eat burgers a lot,”

“Nah uh,”

“Well every time, we're out,”

“Because I'm not a pizza or pasta person,” she made a disgusted face, “and we have tacos at home like everyday,”

“As a snack, not as a meal,”

“You two sound like an old married couple bickering like that.”

Donghae and Rina were stunned to hear that voice.

“Christine,” Donghae looked her way

“Damian,” she looked at him intensely, “Rina,”

“Hello Christine,” greeted Rina

“Oh please, don't let my presence bother you,”

“Well we're about to leave so,” Donghae awkwardly informed her.

He was about to reach for Rina's hand. Rina felt uncomfortable and noticed Donghae reaching for her hand but she held her hands instead.

“Did

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I am so sorry about not updating this fic in such a long time. University life has been taking over me

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mistressdean
#1
Chapter 11: Well, I had thought it would be best for me to comment on this story as a whole rather than scattered my thoughts in several comments, but I just wanted to leave this comment since I'm halfway through your story:

I have to be honest. It took me over six chapters to get into your story, but I kept reading it to give you the benefit of the doubt. The several time-jumps made Jay's and Rina's lives feel like a rush, so it was difficult to enjoy these characters.

But then . . . the breakup came and a wave of emotions hit me. Great job! Up to that point, your story wasn't exactly boring, per say, but it wasn't exciting, if you get what I mean. But that's OKAY! Because your story has a nice sophistication to it :)

I think you definitely established Rina's personality and views and I'm looking forward to seeing how things go with Donghae/Damien :) I shall anticipate the future character development!
mistressdean
#2
Honest to God, that foreword got me hooked! I'll definitely read this later :)
Craycraydee #3
Chapter 17: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!!!!
Missnotsogirly24 #4
Chapter 17: Stujfdgklnvggdctgh she said yes kyaaahhh..... Please update soon ^•^
wenkie0414 #5
Chapter 17: when are they going to meet? i want it soon.. and the complications starts.. lol
jetpitchblack #6
Chapter 16: Go Damian! Rina deserve to be happy with a man that will make her shed tears of joy... Every girl inlove deserves to be happy.. Fighting!!!! kekekeke... Thanks for the update!
Craycraydee #7
Chapter 15: I think i'm still rooting for damian. Let's see in the coming chapters in what will jay do...
wenkie0414 #8
Chapter 15: i am kwonfused but i want the 2 guys fight for her.. like may the best man win.. rightt now donghae have the advantage but is rina over Jay? she hasnt seen him for a long time.. She has to faced him first before jumping into another relationship.. ☺️
Craycraydee #9
Chapter 14: Awww, jay. I know most of us have moments where we decide things we thought we want but eventually regret it in the end. I'm just worried that he would be too late if rina accepts damian's confession. I don't know whom to side anymore :(
Babysmurfette #10
Chapter 13: Please let Rina love Damian/Donghae fully. It would be really better for the good guy to win..