A Real Chance

More Than Romance | HIATUS
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Author's Note.

Maybe I should have not picked three different countries for the story to take place huh? I already said this before but I'll say it again. My writing is obviously in English, but let us all pretend they are actually talking in Korean, yes? Haha. Then when they are in Italy, let us pretend they talk in Korean at home and then English/Italian at school.

 

The week passed slowly for Rina. She was counting the days left before Donghae would step foot on Italian soil again.

 

“You are a big baby,” Yoobin was saying while chewing on potato chips

 

“Says the one who talks while food is in ,” Rina threw a potato chip at her

 

Yoobin made an “I can't believe you just threw that at me” face.

 

“Says the one who just threw food at me,”

 

“Then we're both babies,” Rina crossed her arms

 

“You're so grumpy without Damian, your Donghae,” snickered Yoobin

 

“He's not my Donghae,”

 

“Well you're the only one here that calls him that. And by here I mean all of Italy. Everyone calls him Damian,”

 

“I like his real name,”

 

“Donghae. East sea, right?”

 

“Yeah,”

 

“I find that such a lovely coincidence,”

 

“What do you mean?”

 

“Because you love the sea! And you love ahem, east sea,”

 

“Binnie,” Rina puffed her cheeks

 

“You are clearly the bigger baby,” she laughed

 

“I'm that obvious huh,”

 

“You love that boy. And that boy loves you. It's as clear as the day! I don't know why he hasn't asked you out,” Yoobin crumbled the potato chips' bag

 

“That might be my fault,” Rina mumbled

 

“What?!” Yoobin was on her knees on the couch, ready to shake Rina

 

“I wasn't ready when he confessed to me!” Rina closed her eyes for a shaking but nothing came.

 

“And then?”

 

“Well he said we should just be us,” she opened her eyes

 

“And I bet you didn't say anything else after,”

 

“I was shocked, okay! It was so long ago. Well months ago. You and I were friends but not that close yet. Plus I am awkward with these kind of... issues? Was I suppose to spill everything to you?” Rina tried defending herself

 

“But you waited this long to tell me?! I am hurt,” Yoobin sat properly

 

“I was just trying to go with the flow, but the flow is... not something I'm used to,”

 

“Because you've only dated for real, like once in your whole life,”

 

“Don't make me sound so old!” Rina threw a pillow this time around at Yoobin

 

“We sound like high school girls right now,” Yoobin caught it

 

“Ugh, love. Pathetic,” Rina groaned

 

“Love isn't pathetic,” Yoo

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I am so sorry about not updating this fic in such a long time. University life has been taking over me

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mistressdean
#1
Chapter 11: Well, I had thought it would be best for me to comment on this story as a whole rather than scattered my thoughts in several comments, but I just wanted to leave this comment since I'm halfway through your story:

I have to be honest. It took me over six chapters to get into your story, but I kept reading it to give you the benefit of the doubt. The several time-jumps made Jay's and Rina's lives feel like a rush, so it was difficult to enjoy these characters.

But then . . . the breakup came and a wave of emotions hit me. Great job! Up to that point, your story wasn't exactly boring, per say, but it wasn't exciting, if you get what I mean. But that's OKAY! Because your story has a nice sophistication to it :)

I think you definitely established Rina's personality and views and I'm looking forward to seeing how things go with Donghae/Damien :) I shall anticipate the future character development!
mistressdean
#2
Honest to God, that foreword got me hooked! I'll definitely read this later :)
Craycraydee #3
Chapter 17: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!!!!
Missnotsogirly24 #4
Chapter 17: Stujfdgklnvggdctgh she said yes kyaaahhh..... Please update soon ^•^
wenkie0414 #5
Chapter 17: when are they going to meet? i want it soon.. and the complications starts.. lol
jetpitchblack #6
Chapter 16: Go Damian! Rina deserve to be happy with a man that will make her shed tears of joy... Every girl inlove deserves to be happy.. Fighting!!!! kekekeke... Thanks for the update!
Craycraydee #7
Chapter 15: I think i'm still rooting for damian. Let's see in the coming chapters in what will jay do...
wenkie0414 #8
Chapter 15: i am kwonfused but i want the 2 guys fight for her.. like may the best man win.. rightt now donghae have the advantage but is rina over Jay? she hasnt seen him for a long time.. She has to faced him first before jumping into another relationship.. ☺️
Craycraydee #9
Chapter 14: Awww, jay. I know most of us have moments where we decide things we thought we want but eventually regret it in the end. I'm just worried that he would be too late if rina accepts damian's confession. I don't know whom to side anymore :(
Babysmurfette #10
Chapter 13: Please let Rina love Damian/Donghae fully. It would be really better for the good guy to win..