Chapter 5: I don't why I never noticed before, but u were almost definitely listening to doll house by melanie martinez (or at least had it in my mind) when u wrote this chapter!
"Eventually the little girl blamed the little girl" that line gave me so much goosebumps. This story is awesome!
Chapter 36: holy crap. this story fcked me up.
I love how your style is so simple, but straightforward- they go straight to the feels. Like the way you repeated things and the short sentences made me feel like I was losing control and...idk how to explain it.
And most of the time, when people change the font size and color, it's really obnoxious, but the way you did it, it was just...wow
moving on to the sequel, even though I have homework ^_^
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