My Obsession

Perfect, Beautiful, Exotic

Today was just a normal day like any other. The start of a new week. The start of the new semester. I’d be entering the halfway point of my second year at University today, having just been on 2 months break. The feeling of waking up so early this morning at 6:30 AM was terrible because I hadn’t done it since the day of last semester. The desire to sleep in washed over me, but I wasn’t one to be tardy on the first day of classes. Actually I was genuinely always early, even on days where I’d have slept for less than 5 hours the night before. It was a habit of mine and I was proud of it, regardless of the fact that half of my house mates were not morning people.

Now don’t get me wrong. It’s not like I’m some crazy student who likes to be at school all the time. No, if anything I really hated studying but I wasn’t an underachieving student. I’d always kept my work on top and up to date but I still knew how to have fun. At least, I liked to think that about myself. So why do I always arrive at University about an hour early you ask?

Other than the fact of wanting to be early in general, there was a good reason why I was able to drag myself out of bed every day and look forward to my day. It’s all because I get to see him.

 

 

 

 

Who is he?

 

I can’t even begin to describe this beautiful creature. The first few times I had seen him, I did acknowledge that he was definitely different to most of the guys I had ever seen. It wasn’t only until he started sitting closer to me that I unknowingly began to study his features more in depth. His extra soft looking hair, always styled in the most magnificent way. Those huge, doe eyes that could possibly stare into your soul. That flawless, pale skin that radiated just the right amount of glow. His tall, and slender nose, and his beautifully shaped lips. He was the definition of perfect in my eyes. I thanked the Lord over and over again that I was given the chance to have such a beautiful person come into my life and I knew that I had done something right in my past life. Perhaps I saved the world, or was a ruler who satisfied their country’s needs. Whatever it was, I was glad that I had been rewarded with the privilege to see him every morning on that bus.

I still remember that day, almost a year ago when my mother decided to give in to my complaints. I had made up my mind that I wanted to live away from home once University started, but she was completely against the idea. She thought I wouldn’t be able to survive living without her and the rest of my family, but luckily Chaerin unnie stepped in and offered me a room in her apartment. It was the perks of having older friends who knew your parents well. I had already been attending the same University as Chaerin, and I’d catch my same train to university every day, all up until the end of first semester. I had simply had enough of being obliged to say no every time a friend or classmate would invite me to a party or a club. I knew my mother didn’t like the idea because she was convinced I wasn’t ready to face the world and its ‘danger’, but I wasn’t 10 years old anymore. I was determined to make it happen that I move out of my house, and that’s exactly what I did, with the help of Chaerin and her other roommates. (Which are also mine now.) I figured if I was staying in the same place as Chaerin, I’d be travelling to Uni with her as well but our schedules didn’t match up and my classes were always scheduled much earlier during the day, which caused me to have to travel on my own. It wasn’t a problem really, for I truly treasure being in my solitude and having time to myself. The first week of taking a different route felt weird, and I couldn’t fully relax and listen to my music because I wasn’t sure when to get off the bus. Fortunately, I managed to remember roughly how long the bus ride was, and there were generally people like me who always took the same bus, and I started noticing where some people got on the bus and where they got off.

Right now, the girl who already rides the bus before I get on, is packing her books up frantically because her stop is next. Always sitting on the seat to my right, with her belongings spread out on the spare seat next to her. She was a girl who was probably just a tiny bit shorter than me, and she always wore bright, colourful clothes and had her stylish headphones in, but she would always take her books and pens out then read and highlight her notes. She was definitely a hard worker, which surprised me at first because of the way she liked to dress. A discreet smile played on my lips, for I knew the stop after was when my beautiful creature would enter the bus, and my day would have its beautiful start.

Every time, without fail, my heart skips a beat when he walks inside the bus and takes his usual spot which is exactly 2 seats in front of mine. The brief 10 to 15 seconds he takes to walk up to his seat, gives me time to stare at his thin and tall figure, before he drops his bag to his side, and shuffles in, often turning his head to look outside the window. And here I am, right now, stealing glances at his face. He always peers outside the window, staring to the outside world and rarely blinking. I can never read his expression, for he seems to be so deep in thought, but other times he appears to simply be taking in the scenery. Sometimes I stare intently at his face without caring whether he would notice me or not, but today I made sure I didn’t do it because I remember almost missing my stop a couple times last semester. The bus was approaching my stop soon, and I was feeling content, having had the usual 20 minutes of being in the same bus as him. I stood up as my bus stopped where I get off, and hopped off on the 5 minute walk towards my Uni.

My day was already starting off well, having had my caffeine fix. Yes, he was the caffeine. (I don’t believe in drinking coffee) As I neared the campus of my Uni, I had a moment to remember that it had been almost 9 months of being bus buddies with him, and It made me wonder for the millionth time.

 

 

 

 

 

What was his name?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A/N: Important.

So this is the introduction guys =) I hope you like it and don’t think it’s too boring. Hope you’ve read the small plot I wrote in the description/foreword and mostly I hope you look forward to reading this story =) It’s actually inspired off a real life situation of a friend and I wanted to write a story on it. Of course, I’m adding in my own fiction as well.

Anyway with this story, I’d really love your input in the comments section because I want to know if this story will be good enough to show another friend of mine because I told her I wrote Fanfics XD (When I finish the story, depending on the response I get from you guys, I’m going to give her a copy of this story with different character names and character descriptions but the entire storyline will be the same as this one)

Constructive criticism is always welcome. How would I improve without you giving me tips and ideas? Whether you read this as I’m writing the story, or read this after I complete the story, I’m welcoming ALL comments at any time. Thanks guys and make sure you are subscribed to my other story ‘Your Dance is Addictive’ If you’re a Taeminzy/Kaiminzy shipper!

-Kiseki

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BY THE WAY DID I TELL YOU GUYS THAT I RECENTLY GOT TO SEE EXO IN CONCERT AT KCON AUSTRALIA?! THEY WERE ALL SO BEAUTIFUL BUT IM SAD THAT KYUNGSOO AND YIXING WEREN'T THERE

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i_am_twisted #1
Chapter 30: Ahhh Luhan is indeed a sweetheart. He is your resident clean good boy type. The poster boy for perfect boyfriend. He has a lot of things he keeps to himself though.

But!!!!! I miss my Sehun! Where is he? I'm looking forward reading about him on the next chapter ?
alcyonne
#2
Chapter 30: When you're caught between two handsome men, how could you not waver!? TT I almost feel bad for her, hahah. Gah, I like how you made the decision between Sehun and Luhan through the performances. Singing with Luhan or dancing with Sehun? Man, I mean that's hard itself. She could always do both as you said, to avoid the awkward consequences but you never know! I'm keen for both though. Lots of cute Luminzy here, but a lot of foreshadowing too. I wonder when Minzy will realise what Emi meant? Anyway I do miss Sehun! I wonder what's going on with him? Also I'm bracing myself for IU! Still yet to see what her impact is. Btw Luna and Jongin? *squeal* , that's cute though? Can we see some interactions maybe? (≧∇≦)
Good luck for the next chapter! You're doing great!
lita1s #3
Please finish this story I am a fan of anyone who likes Minzy and this story is very good. Thank you for your work
Missyouwannabe #4
Chapter 29: It’s building up...I can feel it building up omfg.
alcyonne
#5
Chapter 29: Late Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! Finally got time to read your update and ah so many feels. I mourned for a while regarding the tragic that happened a week before christmas, it was really hard. Hope you're fine now as well and had a good time spent during the holidays. Secondly, this made me watch that Lee Hi x Minzy - 1 2 3 4 performance they did in YG Fam concert back in 2014. Ugh, even more feels. As much as I love seeing Minzy free from the dungeon, I definitely miss YG Fam interactions. Secondly, I was totally fangirling when Luhan came. He really is so princely here, it's hard not to like him T_T And the stuff he vented out to Minzy made me sympathise with him even more! I thought I would liked Sehun a little more, but now I'm at loss again! Ah, I'm scared to see this end hahaha. And I can't figure out IU just yet, but she seems to be kind of still into Luhan? Minzy is adorably jealous yes, and it may affect how she sees IU (girl is already uncomfortable with her) but IU seems interested. Hmm, I have a feeling IU might do something in the future.

Anyway, good luck in finishing this in 6 months. I honestly want to do the same, y'know? Fingers crossed we can do it! Hehe. Until next time ♥
i_am_twisted #6
Chapter 29: Merry Christmas!!!! I like IU. I see her personality in some of the girls I know. I'm still Sehunzy coz I like Sehun's personality more. He has a angst, depth and he is mischievous and playful at the same time. I guess I've never been the type to like the clean good boy type? But whatever you decide I'm okay with it! Best of luck to finishing this fic! I will support you till the end :)
alcyonne
#7
Chapter 28: Ah, the bromance gets me...T_T
I kind of feel for Sehun though, I mean, he's totally trying to smother his feelings but it was about time he realised them or even admitted to them. It's been Luminzy for quite a bit until recently. Now with IU's entry in the picture, I don't know how this will affect Luhan going for Minzy and what this also means for Sehun. I'm sure the girl will have an impact on these three and I can't wait to see what that'll be!

Btw omg, you're so lucky you got to see them in KCON Aus. I couldn't fly over to Sydney at the time, so I'm jelly. Imagining them and my other faves walking on the same soil got me sad all week lmfao (I didn't know D.O wasn't there either, awww). I hope you had an amazing time ♥
aratasier
#8
Chapter 28: The ending.. I didn't see it coming! I hope IU's not gonna be a jealous later after Luhan had decided to pursue Minzy. I feel so bad for Sehun like I know Luhan is his bro but boy pls wake up and fight for her too. I hope Minzy could sort out her feelings soon. Thankyou so much for updating!
Missyouwannabe #9
Chapter 28: “Tell me I still have a chance with you” CAN YOU HEAR ME SCREAMING?!!!! My heart stopped and then double timed when he said this omfg. Minzy sweetie Luhan ain’t for you hunny nope uh-uh lol I hope both Minzy & Sehun figure out they really like each other soon or there’s gonna be heartbreak all over
mairimzm #10
Chapter 28: thanks for the mention, this has always been one of my favorite stories, and I love the sehunzy.
Omg luhanzy vs sehunzy ?