Arrival

Different Worlds

There wasn't any turning back. I already boarded the plane and took my seat. I had told my parents that I was leaving a month ago. Already made the decision to make a new life for my self.

I hated bidding my parents goodbye, but it was my dream to go to Korea as cheesy as that sounds. In order to provide them with some comfort, I told them that I would talk to them on Skype and I would try to call or text them as often as I could. I just wanted to show them that I was going to be happy and taken care of.

The pilot's voice broke through my thoughts.

"Prepare for take-off in 10 minutes."

Here we go. Into a whole different world.

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I arrived in Seoul, South Korea at 8:00pm. I was worn out from the long flight and the excitement that pestered me whenever I tried to close my eyes. I was awe struck. It blew my mind that I was standing on the opposite side of the world. 

All of the passengers disembarked the plane and headed their own ways. I went to pick up my luggage and flagged a taxi. That night it looked as if it was going to rain.

A taxi quickly picked me up and took me to my destination. I arrived quickly and booked a room in a hotel just before it started pouring. 

Tomorrow I was going to purchase my place at an apartment complex.

My family was somewhat wealthy, so I didn't have to worry about the down payment on the apartment. I paid for everything else, though: my ticket, monthly rent, food, all that glamorous stuff.

I set my luggage by the door and flopped down on the hotel matress. I suddenly felt a pang of longing for home, to be in my own bed. I let out a sigh and stared at the ceiling.

"You better get your rest, Min Ra. Tomorrow you're going to need every ounce of energy to get through the day," I muttered to myself before allowing the steady rain drops to lull me into a delicate slumber.

 

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A/N: Thank you to GeniusGyuGraphics for the poster! ^^

 

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GeniusGyu
#1
Hello,
your poster is done and ready for pick up.
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ExoticSonee
#2
Chapter 1: For a first fanfic, your grammar's pretty decent tbh. I've never read a sunggyuxoc fic, but I think I'll give this a chance. :)
But, I've noticed that the chapters are quite short? Usually, if a chapter surpasses 3,000 words then it's ready to be posted. :3
But this is written in the first POV so summing up 3,000 isn't that hard because when you live alone and not to mention you're now in a different country, you'll find everything interesting.~
But then again, you're new to writing, so I suggest making your vocabulary, as well as your imagination, broader. :)

Skipping parts is okay, but don't over do it.~ Describe the things she sees and what she thinks about it. On the fourth chapter, I could tell that you improved, if you compare it to the first chapter, so props to that. :D Characterization is very important. So far, I have minimal information about her and sunggyu, so I hope you develop their personalities and such on the future chapters.

Lastly, use metaphors from time to time and refrain yourself from using formal phrases. She's just a teenager, so I don't think it's appropriate. :3

Well, that's pretty much it! ^^ I hope I don't sound too harsh. :( Don't worry! We all have those first stories~ as time goes by, you'll eventually improve! :D
Oh, and tag it as "sunggyu". :>
Btw, if you're curious if I write stories or not, I do, but not on this account. ouo
random_reader #3
Chapter 3: This sounds good for a first fanfic :) . I don't like you/oc fanfic, but this one is not too hard to read for me lol. Good job, keep updating so more people will notice your story ^^!