Entrapped: Sun and Moon

Description

Baekho was never what you would call "interesting." He had no hobbies, no goals, no interests. Until Minhyun. Minhyun showed him the world he had never seen - and then he left. Saying Baekho was meant for someone else. Baekho didn't understand until he stumbled into a house he can now never leave - not until he falls in love with the ghostly occupent - Ren. Ren is from a different time, claims that Baekho is "made" for him, and he's just been waiting around all these years. There's just one problem. Ren can only appear when the sun has set, and Baekho only wakes to the morning sun. Though meant for one another, Ren rises to the moon, and Baekho rises with the Sun. Too different to ever last. 

Foreword

“H-Hello?” he called out, hearing his voice echo in the barren house. Clearly no one had lived here in quite some time. Why would Minhyun have called him here? He took a few steps future, disturbing the dust which rose in clouds about his feet, swirling through the air. He had heard a voice…saying the door was unlocked. But had that really been Minhyun?

“Hello?” He called once more, feeling s hiver crawl up his spine and he spun at the sound of a squeaking floorboard behind him. He darted his eyes around, only now realizes just how much he had assumed from a simple letter.

“You’ll have to wait a few moments, I’m afraid,” spoke a soft voice and Baekho jumped in surprise, now more scared than ever as he could not seem to find the source of the voice. He wasn’t going to wait around any longer, he knew now that wasn’t Minhyun’s voice. He didn’t know whose voice it was. He rushed for the door, jerking at the worn, old and decrepit handle. It wouldn’t budge. Wouldn’t even turn.

“Don’t try to run,” the voice whispered softly, and Baekho couldn’t even begin to hear the sadness which filled the voice without a source. Baekho jerked at the door, kicked and pounded, growing more frantic by the second as the voice continued to plead,

“Baekho, don’t do this. Don’t try to run from me – I can’t let you,” it murmured and Baekho panicked as he felt a breeze brush past him, ignoring the gentle swoosh for what it was and preferring to be terrified out of his mind.

“What are you! Let me go! Let me out!” he screamed, hoping someone would here,

“I can’t. It’s enchanted, this house. No one will hear you cry or scream, no one save me. You, quite literally, cannot leave this house. But that’s ok,” the voice sounded so heartbreakingly hopeful but Baekho didn’t care, hair standing on end, he wanted out and he wanted out now! He didn’t care what this – this voice wanted! He wanted to go home, craved suddenly his boring life. He had been content with that, he should never have sought more, “That’s ok,” the voice continued, there merest breath ghosting over the back of Baekho’s neck, “Because I can’t leave either.” 

 

This is for The Shoes of A Unicorn Writing Contest: Here

 

Check out my other stories <3

A Reasonable Case of Stalking (Baekren - OneShot, C) ~ The Derpy Horror (Baekyeol - OneShot, C) ~ Run And Hide, Hide and Seek (Krishan - Oneshot, C) ~ It Can Never Be You (Joomi - Chaptered, C) ~ Count To Five (Baekren - Chaptered, C) ~ A Monster's Tears (Baekren - Fourshot, C) ~ Entrapped: Sun and Moon (Baekren - Chaptered, O) ~ Forgive Me Not (Baekren - Threeshot, O) ~ Now You See Me (Jongkey - Fiveshot, O) ~ What A Boy Wants (Baekren - Chaptered, O)

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My Stance On Plagiarism (My Personal Rules)

Translations: I allow translations so long as I am *fully* credited at the end of every chapter, with a link back, and I am informed beforehand, and after project completion. I would be very happy if people translated, after all, it pretty much means more people reading my story and knowing me. 

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bine84 #1
Chapter 1: Story seems good... like the idea. . And want to read more:)
OrangePineapple #2
Chapter 11: Do you know how happy it makes me that baekho remembered? I really love happy endings can't wait for the oneshot! Amazing work
OrangePineapple #3
Chapter 10: Ohmygod please do I'm wondering whats gonna happen hopefully they both end up together! Update soon!
OrangePineapple #4
Chapter 9: So cute I really feel for ren and I can see baekho is starting to like him I think it'd be interesting if aron and minhyun end up falling for each Rhee that way everyone will have a partner baekren and minron ohh I can't wait
chiff_624
#5
Chapter 8: Supernatural.. I like a story like this... anyway, it's a good story. a very beautiful story.

Update soon <3
OrangePineapple #6
Chapter 4: This is different but really interesting keep going!!:)