You're Mine

Description

 

Fantasy is not so far from reality.

Mina is an oversized girl with a dream of becoming a football player. But she has self esteem issues and they become worst, especially when the guy she likes calls her and her dream pathetic. She decides that she will no longer be looked down upon and with the help of her brother, Minho, she embarks on a journey to become one of the best female football player.

Soon the crowd will be rooting number seven.


hey guys it been a long time since I wrote this story and i thought of editing it now since i have got a computer for Christmas. I wrote this when i was in junior high and now that my English is slightly better i think its ready for an upgrade. The story may change a little but the goal is the same.

 

Im not going to take the story down, so you will see how it used to be.

 

Foreword

 

 

First Trailer

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtNnjZ1ZfNo&feature=player_detailpage

Second Trailer

Ladydream
Chapters 1 to 4 have been edited by me. (It's not so good but if you want to please read. Some things changed and a chapter has been added called perfect.))

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chocmaniac9
#1
Chapter 21: Umm...truthfully.. I really like the story..somehow i kinda got a grasp about the storyline.. But still, i hope that you could work out your writing structure, grammar n etc..yeahh its kinda heavy to do all that...but still, working on for the best would get u the best isn't it? Maybe you could start off by putting who's who person pov or something.. Or maybe u could decide whether u wanna make it as third party narrator or the person narration...pardon me if i'm wrong... N chaiyokk!!!!