From Tao to Chen

Title: [5/5]

Comments: Fitting to the story, since it uses the same title as the story it followed.

Story Layout: [10/10]

Comments: Simple yet affective. It wasn't too busy and it reflected the mood of the entire story.

Forward and Description: [8/10]

Comments: I wish you had told us that it would be Chen's diary instead of just quoting what happened in the last one-shot.

Plot: [20/20]

Comments: I love that we got to look more into his head. The fact that Tao was an actual person that Chen didn't know about made it better. The fact that he learned all these things about Tao, like the suicide and other things and molded it into a pen pal because of his insanity, was

Characterization: [5/5]

Originality: [10/10]

Comments: At first, I though Tao also committing suicide was a little unoriginal then I remembered that was how Chen got that put in his head.

Flow: [10/10]

Comments: The flow was very smooth and made it easier to read.

Grammar/Spelling: [10/10]

Comments: Flawless, as always. I do like how you had Chen not writing with correct grammar in his sentences at the end.

Overall Enjoyment: [13/15]

Comments: Didn't really tickle my fancy, but I'm glad I got to know more in this.

Bonus Points: [5/5]

Total: [96/100]

Comments: I asked for more and you delivered. That made me so happy when I saw the request in. I apologize for taking so long to complete your request. My trip to D.C. messed up my entire schedule for this shop. Once again, you've scored high points on my scale. You have a true gift of writing and I hope to see more requests come in because I do love to read them. I do hope that you stick to the darker writing that you did here since it is such a rare thing to find now a days.

~ Akane

I hope this review was ok, I pushed myself into doing at least one request tonight.