Chapter 40: I enjoyed the story, as short as it was. I don't think hoping for a future update is realistic considering how long it has been since the last one. The story was cute and lighthearted and an easy read. Though, I do agree with some users: the use of Romaized Korean words is unnecessary. The story is, technically, set in SK and all the characters are speaking Korean or Chinese and the use of random Korean words disrupts the pace of the chapters. You could use italics instead to put emphasis on certain words or when the Chinese members switch to their native tongue.
There were some plot holes such as the confusion regarding whether the main character knows the boys are vampires or not. At some point it seemed like it, but then she returned to her initial obliviousness. Why didn't she question the principle who was able to turn her into a kitten???
Regardless, I enjoyed it.
Chapter 40: Is it done already? Have you given up on this story? Just wanted to tell you that your work is really great. So please continue this. You can't leave us hanging here T.T
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