Chapter 21: Haven't got the chance to read taeny fic with a dialogue that flowing without too much sugar coated..the other writer of taeny's would be donkatsu..you have this magical way of story telling that kept me stay and rooted on your story and wondering what would be the next journey, you as a writer will take me as the reader..either way, i'm in for the long haul.
Chapter 21: When the "updated" sign appear on my subscription list, I don't recognize this title.. Then I read again from the start as I remember the last time I saw your story was like a year ago??
So many thing happened in a year right? Oh well..
I hope you'll end this fic beautifully :)
Chapter 13: ...I'm guessing English is not your first language? Only, 'stop resisting me' is a very creepy phrase if you say it to your girl. It sounds -y.
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