The Next Morning

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Onew was startled awake the next morning to the loud banging noise of a wooden spoon against a frying pan that rang above his head. He whined and twisted in his covers to try and see who had given him such a rude awakening but as he sat up all he was greeted with was the sound of a slamming door. He put head in hands and groaned as he remembered the events that happened the previous evening and how suddenly the members had grown cold.

 

Still confused, he threw back the covers and quickly got ready for the day, once again checking the schedule so the others could take it easy. All the others had to was go to the big interview they had that day and Onew would make sure the van was there in time to take them to the studio for dance practise. He made his way out of the room and into the kitchen, where he found Minho and Jonghyun sitting at the table chatting, while Key fried eggs and bacon in the pan he had been woken with earlier.

 

So it was Key.

 

Onew thought and as he made his presence known in the room, he felt the room temperature drop as they looked at him with icy glares. He tried to ignore this as he went over to sit in the space next to Minho but when he was about to sit, Minho snapped at him,

 

 

“This place is taken, Taemin is sitting here” and he slammed his palm on the seat, preventing him from sitting down. Onew was hurt by his tone as he still didn't know what he had done to make the others angry, but he didn't want to make it worse by arguing so he shuffled round and perched himself at the corner of the table instead. They sat in awkward silence for a minute or two before Onew tried to break it with a lighthearted remark to Key,

 

“Hey Key, Why did you wake me up with a frying pan and spoon?”. He had hoped Key would joke with him but instead he received the angry and snappy reply,

 

“You should be glad I woke you at all, lazy. I'm not yours to order around.” and he slammed the pan down on the heat mat on the table. Onew quickly pulled his hands into himself and flinched in shock at Key's response. He was about to ask what was wrong, but before he could even open his mouth, Key quickly turned and marched back to the fridge to get banana milk for Taemin.

 

“Hey, were is Taemin?” Jonghyun inquired.

 

“I'll go get him” Onew was about to stand but Minho just harshly spat,

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BabyLocket
10/12 - Hi! I'm back, i'm just planning on editing the format structure a little, i hope it will be easier to read now ^_^

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12345654321234565432 #1
Chapter 23: Oh my gosh
That was beautiful.
You finished this story really well.
Loved it
aileessa #2
Chapter 23: I loved it. You are great. Author-nim,Fighting!
GaemSha
#3
Chapter 22: Huhuhuhuhu I like this story sooo much T_T
I'm not SHINee fans. But I like their song and love to watch their variety show.
And suddenly I found this story~ The feeling is just too much :(
I cried T_T Thank you authornim!!! ^^
NyugenTree #4
Chapter 23: Wow the story is just amazing.
Imagine what it would beElike if they made an actual movie for this. I would totally watch it with a bag of 2 hundred tissues...... anyway awsome story. Definitely made me cry. Good job! ^^
StebXRaided #5
Chapter 23: I re-read this story because I remembered how much I loved it and I realized that I hadn't commented already! So though this is long overdue, I really feel that I have to comment on how beautiful and full this story is. The connection within the characters really felt so real and when it was at its worst, it shattered my heart, twice. The reconnecting was gradual enough so that it was realistic and dramatic, but also felt extremely cleansing at every single milestone and by the end, though I had shed many tears, my heart had been fixed and felt stronger than ever. These types of stories that talk about such strong connections and the small mistakes that can break them (and truth-telling that can make them) really resonate within the soul so much that I really have to wonder how on earth you do it? And I know this is just a comment on a fan fiction but this entire story really means so much to me. I hope it affects other people in the same (or at least similar) way that it has affected me and that more people read this utterly beautiful and stunning story. Keep up the fantastic work, I absolutely love it! :-)
shinee7suprejuniro
#6
Chapter 23: Omg this story has made be cry,laugh and angry at the shinee boys and the way they act towards onew, but the end was beautful and heart warming total loved it thanx for writing this
AptonKey #7
Chapter 23: This has either been plagiarized or I've read it before