A Wish Upon a Paper Star by tillynilly

Title (0/5)

The title is cliché and isn’t very interesting. Plus, the title is supposed to be like this, "A Wish Upon a Paper Star."

Appearance (1/5)

The poster, or the picture, is alright, but it could be better. It would be best to request a poster or make one yourself so readers can depict the mood and characters. It would also be best to get a background, too!

Description/Foreword (7/15)

It’s great to see that you have a little summary for readers on your description, but it sounds a bit confusing and a bit boring.

The summary in the very beginning of the foreword is perfect where it is. Before the author’s note, it would be great to see a character cast so readers can see how all the characters look like and what their personalities are like.

Plot (15/25)

It was hard to depict the meaning or the point of the plot. But, other than that, your plot was beautiful. I love it!

Characters (10/15)

The characters are cliché, putting their pride first and then, they come running back to each other for forgivene