Love is Blind by kpoplover9714

Title (0/5)

Your title is very bland and cliché.

Appearance (1/5)

The mood that the poster and the background doesn’t really give off a “sad” feeling. It give off an angst mood and it doesn’t match with the plot line.

Description/Foreword (7/15)

It’s great to have a romantic, sad description and to have the quotes. But, it doesn’t reel readers in. The description is dull and the pictures are useless. It would be better to have a short summary, for readers to have that anticipation to read your story.

For your foreword, it would be easier for readers to have a character cast so that readers can see who will be starring in your story. Keep the author’s note at the end of it.

Plot (0/25)

The plot is very cliché and your story seems to be more like a scenario rather than an one-shot. Also, there are still some loose ties that you didn’t wrap up in the conclusion.

Characters (0/15)

Again, the characters’ personalities are cliché.

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (7/20)

Before: The annoying beeping sound of my alarm clock woken me up.

After: The annoying beeping sound of my alarm clock woke me up.

Before: As I was rubbing my eyes,I looked at the calender pasted on my wall. Today,14 of Feb marks