My 6 Teenage Genies by icreatemasterpiece

Title (1/5)

It's an okay title, but not very eye-catching. The title kind of generalizes your story. Before I read the story, I already knew that six of the characters would probably be the main character's genie. Your title basically summarizes what your story is about. 

In addition, it's supposed to be My Six Teenage Genies. Writing My 6 Teenage Genies is grammatically incorrect. Single-digit numbers should be spelled out.

Appearance (5/5)

Your appearance is very nice! I love it! It definitely relates to your story's theme.

Description/Foreword (7/15)

Your description is perfectly fine. It summarizes your story, which is what exactly a description does.

As for your foreword, I would advise you to take away the character description of Joo Eunha and B.A.P. You would want to show your readers and present them the characters throughout the story instead of telling them. When you tell them, it's a sign of a writer's weakness compared to when you show the readers and make them interpret the characters themselves.

Plot (5/25)

To be honest, I've seen some fanfics like yours around here. The main character (usually an OC or a "You" character) is miserable, but her luck suddenly increases when a few genies pop into her life. Plus, the idea of the boys living with her also makes the plot more cliché. Try twisting your plot a bit. Not all plots are original, but this kind of plot can be seen commonly throughout AFF. 

Characters (5/15)

Once again, the characters are also cl