Fountain of Love by Kris-C25

Title (2/5)

The title isn’t very cliché, but the title is fairly used. And, it isn’t very eye-catching.

Appearance (5/5)

The poster and background slightly contradicts with the story’s mood, but it seems to fit together. Beautiful!

Description/Foreword (9/15)

Your description is a bit messy. Try not to put stars and asterisks or any sort of “decoration.” Put your little author’s note down to your foreword. The quote and little summary is fine where it is. It also would be best to move the Yoona gif and the pictures of the characters down to your character cast.  Also, move the story details and credits down to the bottom of the foreword.

Your foreword is great! Love the quotes. But, for each character, put a picture so readers can see how they look like and can vision them in their mind as they read your story. 

Plot (13/25)

The plot is really cute. It doesn’t seem very unique or original, but I can see that it came from your imagination.

Characters (8/15)

It was a little tough to figure out your characters’ persona