I Hate Calling Guys Oppa! by ShawolElfSone123

Title (2/5)

It's a long title, and reveals a lot about what your story is going to be. I would probably skip this story if I ever passed by it. Plus,  it's supposed to be, I Hate Calling Guys "Oppa!" instead of I Hate Calling Guys Oppa!

Appearance (5/5)

I like your poster! It really fits the theme of your story.

Description/Foreword (5/15)

Let me start with your description. Your description was fine. I didn't understand why you would add two description. If you are going to delete a description, then I highly suggest you deleting the top part of the description since it doesn't really tell the readers a summary of your story. However, your description also told me too much of the story. Before I read it, I could tell that Taemin will be stubborn and will try his best to make you call "oppa," which is the main point of the story.

Onto your foreword. Instead of telling the readers how your characters are, you should show them throughout the story. When telling your writers, it shows how weak of a writer you are. Below your description you have strips of teasers from your story. It tells me a lot about what I'm going to be reading. You should post one or two teasers that do not reveal so much about your story. Authors notes should be deleted since they aren't important to the story, too.

Plot (10/25)

The plot is cliché. A stubborn, rude kingka pesters the main character, who dislikes the kingka, to do something. I can already foresee that the two will fall in love and will happily live ever after. As I see it, it's one of those typical romance fanfics on AFF.

Characters (5/15)

The characters were also cliché. Taemin is the "everyday-AFF's-kingka," Jessica is the cliché bestfriend with the infamous icy glare, and SHINee are the kingkas. The only character I liked was probably Soomin, who is bold enough to not call people "oppa."

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (10/20)

Your flaws mostly came from punctuation. Your grammar and spelling are okay. I highly suggest you to delete to emoticons and the random author notes you put in bet