Doralice

Description

You have to tread with care when dealing with cats, they have influence and are seen in all the smart places.

In Doralice (Dora- lease) the people are starving. They're ruled by a quartet of Royal Houses that pass their leadership through bloodlines and that think nothing of their people. When you are born, you are placed in the House the land you were born on belongs to. Doralice citizens must pay taxes weekly to the local magistrate, who will then send the collective funds to their Royal House. Refusal to pay or inability to pay one's share of the taxes will result in one's immediate execution or imprisonment, depending on one's House.

Life in Doralice is horrible.

And a resistance is starting.

Foreword

It is important to note tha in Doralice gravity works in strange ways. If you are sitting on your bed and stand up and walk over to your wall, you can proceed to walk up it. Gravity will pull you towards the last wall/floor that you were standing on (Or the last wall/floor that the person carrying you was on). Fashion is essentially non-existent. You can have your pick of design but most clothes are black, white, or red, with the exception of clothes sold in the Diamond Queendom. The Diamond Queens are always fond of Color.

The Diamond House
The Diamond court, also known as the Jeweled Queendom, is ruled by a drag named Sungjong; but don't let her hear you say that unless you're not particularly fond of your head. She rules her Queendom with diamond hardness, assisted only by her bodyguard Hoya. Reportedly the hardest to please, Queen D is rarely seen and stays within the safe confines of her crystal palace. The houses and buildings in this Queendom are sharp and modern, with many made of glass or reflective metal. The Diamond house has no soldiers of their own. Refusal or inability to pay taxes will result in immediate death by the Executioners' Axe Room (EAR).

The Queendom of Spades
The Queen of Spades is the only 'actual' women in the quartet.  She is a headstrong, methodical leader. Her Queendom is black and the architecture is that of a giant spider web.  Buildings and homes are oval shaped and covered with black spiders silk. The members of this Queendom swing and jump from web branch to web branch until they reach their destination. Messengers/package deliverers use specially designed contraptions that look like unicycles to travel the webs. The Queen of Spades name is UEE. She is exceedingly beautiful but lacks emotion. The Queendom of Spades has no soldiers. Refusal or inability to pay taxes will result with the citizen being forced to drink a horrible poison that causes an excruciatingly painful death.

The Kingdom of Clubs
Jaebum, or Jay Park, is the King of Clubs. All the best parties are thrown by 'Clubbers' (citizens of the Club Kingdom.) The Kingdom is full of very loud, music-loving youths. There's always a party going on somewhere but it's only a good one if you have a Dancer. Dancers are professional dancers that also serve as the Club Kingdom's militia. They're the coolest people in the Kingdom and are chosen by the best Dancer (Jaebum.) Jay is known to be ist, viewing men as superior to women, with the singular exception of the Queen of Spades. He seems to be quite smitten with her but she ignores his advances. The Kingdom of Clubs has no soldiers. Refusal or inability to pay taxes will result in the citizen being clubbed to death. (Author K note: If you're stupid like me, Author A means beaten with a stick. I misunderstood and thought she mean danced until you died)

The Hearts Kingdom
The Kingdom of Hearts is a place with no rules. The city is black, white and red all over; stained with the blood of traitors, brothers, bad dentists and innocent bystanders. Murder is big business with no capital punishment as a consequence. The King of Hearts, Siwon, is known as being both the cruelest war leader Doralice has ever seen, and the most handsome. Women of the Kingdom would give anything just to be in his presence. His Majesty of Hearts is served by the White Rabbit, Mary Ann, Pat and Bill. The White Rabbit is known as Kwanghee and he is rude to those of lower rank but grovels at the feet of those of higher rank. Mary Ann is the maid though it's actually a man named Ryeowook; Because of his feminine appearance and position, the King of Hearts calls him Mary Ann. Pat is actually a team of two people, Donghae and Eunhyuk, and they are assigned odd-jobs around the Palace/ the Capital. Sometimes they go into the market to pick up food for the chef and sometimes they give the announcement of raised taxes. Bill is the resident Butler and he also goes by Key. He is in charge of planning banquets and keeping track of the Kingdom's money. Refusal or inability to pay taxes will result in you being used as target practice by the either the Playing Cards or CATS.

Playing Cards
The Playing Cards are the warriors. They are trained in the Hearts Kingdom and then sent throughout Doralice to protect its borders, keep its people in order and execute those that need to be done away with.

CATS
The Court's Army of Traditionalist Soldiers (CATS) are the elite Playing Cards. When someone becomes a CAT they're given a potion that heightens their senses and increases their overall limberness and expands their minds so they can see the smallest details and solve problems effortlessly. They're called Tradionalists because they made sure the traditions of Doralice are upheld. They keep the four royal courts ruling over all others and they're the ones who fight the resistence.

~~ Note from the Author

The foreword is getting lengthy so chapter one will cover the people in the Resistence and the story will begin on Chapter Two. Sorry for the long wait, I had several tests last week and my computer has been revocked until Monday 05/14. The chapter on the resistence will be completed by 05/15 at the latest. If there is anyone you'd like to see in this story please leave a commet and I will try to fit them in as at least a minor character. Also please note all characters personalities may not be entirely correct because their characters are meant to be evil/corrupt or just because I don't know how to accurately portray them. UEE and Kwanghee are many peoples biases and just so you know they are MEANT to be evil/corrupt in this so please don't be offended. Again, if theres anyone you'd love to see on Doralice please leave a comment with their Name, age (birthday), group and what youd want to see them as and who youd like to see them interact with.

Example:

Name: G-dragon // Jiyong

Age/bday: 08/18/88

Group: BIGBANG

I'd like to see him as a resistence leader and he should interact with The Eaglet and Duchess~

SuddenRealization
HOLY CRAP IT'S WORKING NOW. Okay, well, that was pretty intense for everyone I'm sure. We'll try to continue the story soon, sorry for the delay

Comments

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Palitas #1
please update
Love this couple and Uee <3
Purple92
#2
omggg i love her eyes :PP
and i want to see eaglet and kwon using their new skills :D

thanks so much for the update! :DD
i'll be waiting for the next one :D
Purple92
#3
Ahhhh!!!! So many new characters can't waiiitttt!! >.<
I also have insomnia :PP and was checking for new updates!!
u tricked me!:PP for a moment i thought it was a new chap and got all excited when i saw the pictures of the new characters
hahahaha now i won't be able to sleep :PP kidding
I'll be waiting! update soon please :DD
Purple92
#4
Just read the new chaps :)
hahaha no wonder Ailee is always smiling she's definitely from the Diamond house xD
And also about The effects from the injections
how long is supposed to last? O:
can't wait to read what kind of effects has in them!! >.<
please upload soon! :DD
Purple92
#5
new mission yes!!!
i sense more action and spy work coming O:
and also more people coming to the story!! love duchess dara the name suits her well haha
i really like how you arranged the characters in the story btw :)
looking forward to the next chap :DD
K-PopDream #6
I like how your story's progressing, but I think that the transitions are a little unstable since they are somewhat hard to connect without reading and going back to the descriptions for code names. I can understand since there are two authors, but if you could fix that or like when mentioning the code name, in brackets put the characters picture.
Ex: ..... The Mad Hatter (Heechul) ........

Other than that, I love the story. It looks great. I hope that you can make Ailee one of the main characters in this story because I love the plot of this, yet I want a really good and long story to include Ailee as the main character. I haven't really found one yet since Ailee just debuted this year and not too many people know her as well as some of the other groups.

Good luck! I love it.

~K-PopDream
Purple92
#7
i luv ur story :DD
the action scenes are pretty good!!
i havent read a good action story in a long time
glad i found this one :)
i'll be waiting for the next chap :D