Seial Killer

Vacation House (Abandoned house Sequel)

After they went to the hospital they proceed to their way.

“Good thing it is just a sprained.” Hankyung said.

“Yeah.” CL said.

They are now travelling when the bus stops.

“Not again! I thought you guys fixed it!” Dara said.

“We fixed it! But there is something wrong again.” Leeteuk said.

“Just fix it. We must get to another place to stay for the night.” Taeyeon said.

After 30 minutes…

“I need to pee.” Minzy said.

“I remember Raina said that there is a gas station near here. You can go there.” Sunny said.

“Ok. Who wants to come?” Minzy asks.

“I do. I won’t let you go alone.” Ryeowook said.

“Why are you so protective to her?” Bom asks.

“Because Ryeowook’s likes her.” Yesung whispered to Bom.

“Oohh… Is that so? Ok! You two go now.” Bom said.

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“Raina unnie lied when she said that there is a gas station near here.” Minzy said. They are walking for 30 minutes and didn’t see a gas station.

“Do you want to go back?” Ryeowook asks.

“Aniyo. We must be getting nearer.” Minzy said.

Minzy was right. When they continue their walk they were able to see the gas station.

“I’ll be quick in the comfort room, oppa.” Minzy said.

“I’ll be inside the convenient store.” Ryeowook said.

Ryeowook enters the convenient store. He saw the cashier and two people.

He decided to buy a water bottle. He was thirsty because of the long walk.

“Annyeong Hasaeyo!” the cashier greets.

Ryeowook just smile.

“A traveler?” the cashier asks.

“Well, you can say that.” Ryeowook said.

“Where are you going?” the cashier asks.

“We are going to Villa Hyoyeon.” Ryeowook said.

The two guys walk closer to him. “Villa Hyoyeon?” the guy asks.

Ryeowook looks at him. He is taller than him.

“What are you doing in Villa Hyoyeon?” another guy asks.

“I don’t think I should answer that because I don’t know you.” Ryeowook said.

“Oh! Don’t get us wrong. We are just curious.” The guy said.

Then, Minzy enters the store. “Oppa, let’s go.” Minzy said.

“Hello beautiful lady.” The guy greets.

Minzy blushed.

“I’m Onew.” Another guy said. “And this is my friend Minho.”

“Hello! I’m Minzy and this is Ryeowook oppa.” Minzy said.

“Minzy, let’s go. We have a long walk back to the bus.” Ryeowook said. He doesn’t like talking with the two guys.

“Bye, Onew oppa and Minho oppa.” Minzy said.

“Bye beautiful!” the two said.

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“Will you please stop talking to strangers?” Ryeowook said. They are walking back to the bus.

“Oppa, why are you angry?” Minzy asks.

“I’m not angry. It is just that I’m jealous, ok?” Ryeowook said. “I don’t want you talking to strangers. Especially guys.”

“Oppa is jealous!” Minzy said and giggled.

“It is not funny.” Ryeowook said.

Then, Minzy’s cellphone rang.

“Seo, we are on way now back to the bus.” Minzy said. She was talking to Seohyun.

“Minzy, I think I forgot my cellphone on the gas station.” Ryeowook said.

“You must left it on the cashier.” Minzy said.

“I’ll go back to the store to check it. You, you go back now to the bus.” Ryeowook said.

“Araso.” Minzy said.

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Minzy was walking alone when she saw something moving on the forest. She takes a look to see what it is.

Then, she heard someone is talking.

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“Alright! Everyone, get in the bus. We can go now!” Leeteuk said.

“Oh! Finally! It is so hot outside!” Yoona said.

“Where are Ryeowook and Minzy?” Sunny asks.

“Probably they are waiting for us in the gas station.” Donghae said.

“Ok! Let’s go to the gas station.” Shindong said.

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Ryeowook was walking back now when he saw something on the ground. He walks faster to check it out, then, he was surprised of what he saw.

“M-Minzy…” he said. “What’s wrong?”

He saw blood flowing from the right side of Minzy’s body. “Minzy, who did this to you? Tell me!” he said. But Minzy is unconscious. Ryeowook didn’t know if she is still alive.

Then, he heard the bus coming.

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“Isn’t that Ryeowook?” Yesung asks.

“Ne. But what is he doing at the middle of the way?” Eunhyuk asks.

Shindong stops the bus. Taeyeon, Siwon, Kibum and Yesung came out of the bus.

Taeyeon screamed when she saw the two.

“What happened to Minzy?” Siwon asks.

“I don’t know.” Ryeowook said. He is crying.

Seohyun, Kyuhyun and Hyoyeon came out of the bus, too.

“You don’t know? You two are together!” Taeyeon said.

“I-I forgot my cellphone on the gas station, so I went back to get it. I told her to go back first but when I was walking my way back to you, I saw her lying on the ground.” Ryeowook said. Yesung hugs him from his back trying making him calm.

Kibum check Minzy’s pulse. “She is still alive. We must get her to the hospital, immediately.” Kibum said.

“Ok! Let’s go back to the hospital.” Siwon said.

“Omo! What happened to Minzy?” Seohyun asks.

“Just get back in the bus.” Taeyeon said.

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At the hospital…

Minzy is safe now but she is still unconscious. Someone need to left in the hospital to check on Minzy. Ryeowook volunteers himself because he thinks that it is his fault why Minzy was almost killed by a serial killer.

“Take care, Ryeowook. Call us if Minzy is awake.” Yesung said.

“Ne, hyung.” Ryeowook said.

“Can’t I leave here? I am Minzy’s friend.” Seohyun said.

“You can’t. We need you because you can talk to ghost.” Bom said.

“But Hyoyeon unnie can do it.” Seohyun said.

“Seo, we don’t know what will gonna happen to us once we reach the Villa Hyoyeon. We badly needed your help. Please. Everything is gonna be alright.” Hyoyeon said.

“O-Ok. “ Seohyun said.


It is kinda short, i think? O.o

 

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nadianatasya #1
Chapter 23: wow...this story is deabak...more friendship story please...:D
myrah87 #2
Chapter 5: It's really scary!!
If I were them I will fainted...
Seriously!!
LittleGirl_19 #3
Chapter 23: I've allready read ur story 2 times and i still love it :*
Pls keep writing horror ff >.<
ur story is Daebakk!! ^^
snowsparkle #4
Chapter 22: daebakkkkkkk!
t0xicfantasies_
#5
Chapter 23: Enjoyed reading this ^^
t0xicfantasies_
#6
Chapter 19: Omg haha typical Onew!!! "I smell Chicken!":'D
SGhyoyeon
#7
Really cool story!! Theres seem to have more mystery the house;) well i think you can make a sequel!! Please~~~
infiknight_hyohyuk #8
i've waited the sequel of abandoned house because you left some unsolved clues in abandoned house and today i just found this. i finished this in two hours. wow really you're great:D i loooooovveee thiss:)