The Mall

Vacation House (Abandoned house Sequel)

After long hours of travelling, they reach a town and they found a mall.

“Let’s have a break for a while, since only 2 more towns and we will be able to reach the villa.” Kibum said.

“Alright! I miss the mall!” Bom said. “Leeteuk, would you like to go with me?”

“Of course, baby.” Leeteuk said.

“Yesung, you go with me in the mall. You are always quiet since we left Ryeowook in the hospital with Minzy.” Dara said.

“I’ll just stay here.” Yesung said. Ryeowook hasn’t called him since they left them in the hospital.

“Yesung, go with Dara. You need to relax.” Taeyeon said.

“Ok.” Yesung said.

All of them went to the mall; some of them went to buy some foods while some are just to relax.

Yesung, Dara, Bom, Leeteuk, CL and Hankyung are together.

“I want to buy some new clothes.” Bom said.

“Me too.” Dara said.

Yesung is keep on looking at her cellphone, hoping that Ryeowook will call him. Then, his waiting is ended. His cellphone rang and he saw Ryeowook’s name in the screen.

“Guys, it’s Ryeowook.” Yesung said. He quickly answers the call.

Yesung: Ryeowook, at last you finally call.

Ryeowook: Hyung, mianhae. Someone bumped me and broke my cellphone last week. But now it is newly fixed.

Yesung: How’s Minzy?

Ryeowook: She hasn’t waking up yet. How are you all?

Yesung: Two more towns and we are going to reach the villa.

Ryeowook: That’s good. Are there something strange going in there?

Yesung: Nothing at all. Except when we were in the hotel but everything is settled. Why?

Ryeowook: Nothing. I just thought that someone is watching us in here. Just like someone intentionally trying to break my cellphone so that I cannot contact you.

Yesung: Do you need my help there? Do you want me to go back so that I can be with you and Minzy?

Ryeowook: Aniyo. I can take care of myself and Minzy. Everyone needs you there, too.

Yesung: Just call me if something is wrong going on there, araso?

Ryeowook: Ne. Need to go now. Take care.

Yesung: You, too.

“So, how are Minzy and Ryeowook?” Dara asks.

“Minzy hasn’t waking up, yet.” Yesung said. “Where are the others?”

“Leeteuk went to buy some flowers for Bom while Bom is busy looking for a new clothes.” She said.

“How about CL and Hankyung?” he asks.

“Just having their time alone.” Dara said.

“Where do you want to go? Do you want to buy some clothes?” he asks.

“I want to just look around the mall with you.” She said.

“Ok! Let’s go.” He said. He is now in the good mood. But he can’t help to get worried because of what Ryeowook said about someone is watching them. Is it one of the kidnappers? All he can do is pray for the safety of Ryeowook and Minzy.

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Bom was busy looking at the cute shirts when Leeteuk came. He was holding a flower bouquet. He gave it to Bom. “Oh! You are so sweet!” Bom said. “But why did you give me this?”

“Nothing. I just want to show you how much I love you.” Leeteuk said.

In return, Bom kissed Leeteuk. “And that is how I show my love to you.” Bom said and smiled.

“Let’s go somewhere else. Everyone is looking at us.” Leeteuk said.

“Ne.” Bom said.

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At the ice cream parlor…

“How’s your foot?” Hankyung asks CL.

“It is ok now. I can walk it long.” CL said.

“Don’t push yourself. I don’t want you to get hurt again.” Hankyung said.

“Hankyung, thanks for taking care of me.” CL said.

“Don’t thank me. It is my duty to take care of you because I am your boyfriend.” Hankyung said.

“In return I will take care of you for the rest of my lives.” CL said.

“We will take care each other.” Hankyung said.

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At the market…

“What else do we need to buy?” Sunny asks. While the others are walking inside the mall, the rest of the group went to the market to buy foods and things. They group themselves into two so that they can buy many foods.

Sunny, Sungmin, Seohyun, Kyuhyun, Taeyeon, Siwon, Yoona and Donghae are in the same group.

“Chocopie!” Yoona said.

“Chocopie again?” Donghae asks.

“What’s wrong?” Yoona asks.

“You will get fat.” Donghae said.

“Yah! It will never happen. I only ate one chocopie per day.” Yoona said.

“Ok. One box of chocopie for my love.” Donghae said.

“Make it three.” Yoona said.

“Why three?” Donghae asks.

“Just buy it. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee.” Yoona said and make a puppy eyes.

“Araso. Araso.” Donghae said.

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On the other side of the market…

“Hon, what do you like to eat while you are driving?” Sooyoung asks sweetly.

“I want some dark chocolates.” Shindong said.

“Ok! I will get you dark chocolates.” Sooyoung said.

Heechul and Yuri are wanted to vomit because of the sweetness of Shindong and Sooyoung.

“Shindong, you need to eat a powder of coffee so you will stay awake.” Heechul jokingly said.

“Shindong, honestly speaking, how did you make Sooyoung fall in love to you? Did you use some love potion?” Yuri jokingly said.

“Yul and Heechul oppa, stop that. Don’t make fun of Shindong.” Hyoyeon said.

“And Yuri, when did you start making fun of Shindong? You always hit Heechul if he is having fun to Shindong.” Eunhyuk said.

“That’s why we are couple. We are compatible to each other.” Heechul said. “Right, Yul?”

Yuri nodded.

Kibum and Sooyoung came back.

“Do we have all we need?” Kibum asks.

“Only left is ramen.” Hyoyeon said. “I’ll go get it. You guys go to the cashier. I’ll catch up with you.” And she left.

The stand where the ramens are is high. She tried to reach it but she can’t. “Aish! I hate being lack of height.” Hyoyeon said. Then, someone takes a ramen; a guy from her side took it and gives it to her.

“Here it is.” The guy said.

“Kamsahamnida.” She said.

“Do you need many?” the guy asks.

“I-I need 2 big packs of ramen.” She said.

The guy takes another big pack of ramen and gives it to her. It was so big that she can’t hold it together.

“I’ll help you.” The guy said.

“Kamsahamnida. My friends are waiting for me in the cashier.” She said. The two walk towards the cashier.

“I’m Jonghyun.” The guy said.

“I’m Hyoyeon.” She said.

“Nice name.” the guy said.

“Kamsahamnida.” She said.

Then, they saw Hyoyeon’s friends. Hyoyeon introduces Jonghyun to them. After paying what they bought they decided to go back to the bus. It is time to go now.

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“Bom, we need to go now.” Leeteuk said after they received the text from Kibum.

“Ok. But I need to pee.” Bom said. They saw a way that leads to the comfort room.

“I’ll wait you here.” Leeteuk said.

“I’ll make it quick.” Bom said.

Bom went to the girl’s CR and quickly refresh herself. She was the only one in the CR and it gives her a creep. She was about to leave when she heard a noise coming from the other door.

She silently opens the door and it was dark. She opens the light and saw Jessica on the corner with Hyoyeon’s adopted parents. They were all tied up.

“OMG! Sica! What are you doing here?” she asks. She removed the tape that was on Jessica’s mouth.

“W-Who are you?” Jessica asks. They can’t see her because they were blindfolded.

“It’s me Bom.” Bom said and removes the blindfold to Jessica.

“Bom unnie!” Jessica said.

“How did you get here?” Bom asks.

“S-Some-”

“Hello Park Bom.” Someone said from their back. They didn’t realize that someone enters the room.

Bom turns around and her eyes widened when she recognizes the guy.

“You?” she said.

“Yup. It is me.” The guy said.

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Leeteuk was waiting for 15 minutes to Bom but Bom hasn’t coming yet. He can’t take it anymore. He asks a girl that who went back after she went to the CR.

“Miss, did it happened that you see a girl in the CR?” he asks.

“Aniyo. I was alone when I entered the CR.” The girl said.

“Kamsahamnida.” He said.

He quickly calls the other. “Guys, I think Bom is missing.” He said.


 

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nadianatasya #1
Chapter 23: wow...this story is deabak...more friendship story please...:D
myrah87 #2
Chapter 5: It's really scary!!
If I were them I will fainted...
Seriously!!
LittleGirl_19 #3
Chapter 23: I've allready read ur story 2 times and i still love it :*
Pls keep writing horror ff >.<
ur story is Daebakk!! ^^
snowsparkle #4
Chapter 22: daebakkkkkkk!
t0xicfantasies_
#5
Chapter 23: Enjoyed reading this ^^
t0xicfantasies_
#6
Chapter 19: Omg haha typical Onew!!! "I smell Chicken!":'D
SGhyoyeon
#7
Really cool story!! Theres seem to have more mystery the house;) well i think you can make a sequel!! Please~~~
infiknight_hyohyuk #8
i've waited the sequel of abandoned house because you left some unsolved clues in abandoned house and today i just found this. i finished this in two hours. wow really you're great:D i loooooovveee thiss:)