Username: baetaetae

Story Title (&link): You In Me

Main Characters (+pairings): Park Chanyeol + Byun Baekhyun

Genre(s): Dark

Current Length (No. of Chapters):

Rated?: Yes

Reviewer: KissDromedaGirl

_______________ ✦일번; part one; the beginning. ✦_______________

Title;  5/5

At first glance, it looks ual. Especially rated. But then you put the inspo as the song from KARD.

Poster/Background;  3/5

Dark and subtle.

Description & Foreword;  9/10

First off, mentioning to listen to that song is good. Maybe try inputting the actual video into the descr or something? Or linking it? [Mainly I am lazy af, so others can be too]
Definitely dark and alluring. Especially since this fic is short and doesn't need too much detail in the main foreword. And I always approve appropriate warnings, even if a rating is included.

_______________ ✦이번; the second part; the seam.✦_______________

Creativity/Originality;  5/5

I love how you wrote this. Obsession is a demented, dark thing, but I can see and feel the need in Baek's words and how even Yeol was so caught up in Baek and was trying to be there, even if he could tell Baek was becoming a dark mess.

Plot;  19/20

I expected him to be dead, but the fact he did it so effortlessly (and how you wrote it) surprised me a bit. I'd actually like to see you write out more about how Baekhyun reacts as Chanyeol dies. Poison will take a couple of minutes to completely kill, so I'd imagine Baekhyun still smiling and telling Chanyeol how they'll be together forever. Otherwise, I