Rulebook of the Bachelor Mansion

Bachelors' Paradise - BTS Ver //Did you ever dream of dating BTS?
 

LAdies,  here is what you have to expect

Because this is a game after all


 


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What will await the girls in the mansion?



The whole story takes place in one of the mansions of the bachelors (yupp, there's a hidden card allowing them to destroy one of his houses). The mansion is far away from the big cities, though, so nobody can interfere and media (such as newspaper reporters, dispatch paparazzi etc) will not be allowed to be around. MBC who will be the ones to broadcast the program will take legal actions against anyone trying to dig out dirt about the bachelors, so their private lives stay a secret as long as possible. However, the contestants are not allowed to use computers or smartphones once they get in since they could look up facts about the bachelors or get influenced by the media etc. They are allowed to call back home or get calls, nevertheless, so don't worry, nobody has to miss mommy and daddy. 
The whole mansion is full of cameras and the camera teams will be around 24/7. However, the bachelors' private rooms are a camera- free zone, so if your character ends up following them into their rooms, nobody except for them knows what's happening in there. But yeah, even the girls' bedrooms are full of cameras... the producers have to know and edit it well if one or two of the contestants start to conspire after all. 

 



What will await YOU in the mansion?



So what is all this about the stats etc in the app sheet? This actually is a pretty important point for the story. Stats determine how your character will do in challenges and how well they might click with some of the bachelors. Each of the bachelors have an ideal type and regarding their preferences your character might win over others because of their stats. There are plenty of girls going for the same guy, so consider this pretty well. But the stats aren't that important or better said useless when you make the right or wrong decision. What I am talking about?



This is an interactive "Choose your own Adventure" applyfic.

 

 

In other words: It's up to you what will happen to your character. At the end of each chapter I will ask you some questions in the Author's Note section that you will have to answer either in a comment or in a PM. The decisions and answers you give will decide how far your character will get in this. I won't decide who matches best to the bachelors, it is all up to you. I have the challenges and outcomes all prepared, if you decide wisely or you're just simply lucky, your character ends up in challenges that they can win thanks to their stats or they are lucky and end up on one on one dates or group dates in which they can increase their stats or get to know the bachelors better so they might save your character from being eliminated later. You could also be very, very unlucky and end up in challenges that your character will lose and automatically get eliminated. 
Further, some of the bachelors will ask certain characters out on dates or into their rooms. Keep in mind that if you decide to follow them, the other bachelors will certainly get to know about it and be less interested in your character then (might be the other way round, too, it all depends on dynamics). Sooo... whatever you are going to do: What goes around, comes around.

 

 

authors note

Since there have already been plenty of apps in just a few days, I decided I'd give away some of the things I've been planning for this story. And that includes how the whole thing works - the Choose your own Adventure aspect. Some of you might have wondered about the Stats in the app sheet. This is why. So yeah... have fun with it, I hope you are as excited as I am about it!

btw: I decided that I might extend the number of contestants if there are a lot more apps than expected (tbh I was afraid I would not make it to even get the 21 but atm it looks pretty much as if I would make it even before the deadline). I will eliminate more contestants though each round because of that to get a decent number of contestants for the boys to focus on during the story. I just thought that maybe 21 girls for 7 guys is a bit sad since that would mean they have like only 3 girls each and in the original bachelor series there is one guy with about 25 girls.

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wuyifamous
#1
Chapter 48: the taken men are so in love with their significant other that it melts my heart, although i'm still a little sad and angry that even if they didn't actually participate in flirting or wanting to fall in love with the girls, the girls still fell in love with them not knowing that they love someone already. it's truly emotional to think about this past year that i was a part of this story even though i didn't write it nor was i even part of it in real life but i feel a connection to the story and you the author. i don't think you know how good of a writer you are.
AliceReverie
#2
Chapter 48: Wow I didn't expect their backstories to mesh so easily! 8O
They all became such different people... time really changes things.
I enjoyed this fic, I think because of the range of personalities. ^o^
iisMoMo #3
Chapter 48: LEGIT TEARS! and almost screamed when i read "i'm pregnaunt. it's yours" WHY YOU PLAY ME LIKE THAT!? TT__TT you got me good...but okay oh gosh hoseok proposing to JK is hilarious. ,,,oh my I nearly choke. JK needs to meet someone in Seoul.......lowkey smiling and happy. *blow kisses to jey* OH SNAP! JK came up with the show....awwwwwwww and he was thinking of Hoseok too.....seokjin and yoongi's breaks my heart. HOLD UP!~ Jimin? oh gawd...but how can you even be friends with him.....?//....awww...but like Juna was such an amazing girl that i feel like now i know why yoongi befriended her. gosh i miss juna. tsk tsk tsk Miso can smell a jerk a mile away. i understand why jimin felt betray and hurt but son thats not how you should live. the broke a cold one talking about poor yeonhee.....she's strong so she'll get over it but man thats so harash namjoon. heheeh but the the wholle thing about him saying stuff hoseok wrote is still gold and a fav from the whole show. ok ok i love inguk so much tho. hu hu hu ~~~

standing ovation to you jey-chan! you did so well and such a great job! we gotta wait till end of season 2 T__T
its okay i will always be here! i love you jey
AliceReverie
#4
Chapter 47: So happy for Yumi and Hoseok I can't even! 8D And the tsundere ship is sailing!!!! *KNEW IT*
Poor Aejin, Yeonhee, and Johanna. TT^TT Jiwoo though, omg I knew she'd change her mind but it's still so funny! XD
I'd figured who were the two already taken, but the hidden cards were quite *unexpected*
Inguk & Jiho though! *best couple award please* 8'D And finally... NARA IS A LEGEND!!! <3
wuyifamous
#5
Yumi of course will chose Hoseok, how can Yumi not love Hoseok for who he is. he is and was amazing since day one to her. and I'm sorry for the late comment and answer. you started this in December of 2016 and now it's April 2018. i am at awe of your dedication because i think it's very hard to keep a story going for this long. especially I've been on aff for years and most authors usually never finish their apply fics. you did a great job. the story flow smoothly and all the characters were phenomenal. these two last chapter were fill with heartache and insane revealing of relationship love lines. i've been so busy with school and work that i am not able to comment a lot lately. thank you once again and can't wait to read the two last chapters.
iisMoMo #6
Chapter 47: Episode 10 - The Final Rose !!! I AM A NERVOUS WRECK READING THAT CHAPTER TITLE! already?! this was unexpected i didn't think we get another update untl next week...... it has been so long but it also seem so not long ago too! hu hu hu but that gif tho! *heart eyes* Tae is from NY! whaaa VINCE KIM! goodness~ dead. I'm standing there TAE! i am! i just wanna pet him and coo him and swaddle him same goes to Aejin too! JK! he is heartbroken and still piss! I BET JIWOO is not gonna be there! the jimin with water droplets was too memorizing! WHOOAAAH......okay hahaha the commercial break...WHAA! Jimin a liar! hehehe has table turn now? will jiwoo be obsess with jimin oppa now? jimin's plan totally back fired bad. let me help her clean up her jk shrine. ... speaking of hidden card! is Jin the hidden card? designer's dress are expensive and to have a show in Europe and....craaaaaaaaaaaaap have we all been focusing on the wrong guy here?! but honestly i think he is the married one OR Yoongi! or NAMJOON! definitely not Hoseok cause if he was he wouldnt be asking Jin to make a dress! OH SHIIT! O M G Namjoon...namjoon,,,,, yeonhee ah!!!! no no no! oh crap! our mature lady of the house. *CHOKES* Hoseok is an heir! hold up! did he say first? that means there is more then one! oh oh ...my heart is racing and fluttering for HOMI! Hoseok's airplane insert! hehehehe available now on itunes. SEOKJIN!!!!~~~~ that beautiful man has a family! Nara is badass till the eeeend! i love her. Yoongi is a hidden card! what is this boy doing starting this kind of show but not really being active in it either lol. Mihoon and Joanna!!! my babies!!! its okay sweetheart! you deserve someone special who will love you and only you. INGUK IS A HIDDEN MASTER CARDDDDDD!!!!!!! bissssssh. YES! this is the best thing from the show! O M G JIHO and INGUK! OH MY GOSH! yaaaaassssssssss okay i wow i just man Inguk and Jiho is wonderful. thank you so much Jey so such a amazing and fun story. you been so busy with dancing and life that i am honestly just so grateful towards your dedication to this. TT__TT i dont wanna say bye....
samasbananas
#7
Chapter 46: Answer first: Obvs Yeonhee is choosing Namjoon. I mean she's never really felt a connection with many (read any) men, but she feels one with Namjoon. I just hope he chooses her tbh. I just want my bby to be happy ;-;

THINGS I LIKED;
1. Holy crap, Cipher is hella thirsty for Nara
2. Oooh, Johanna drama. I think it's cool how we get an insight in the Bachelor's relationships in these BTS chapters. But I really hope Yoongi will it up and stop being a baby just bc Johanna is spending time with Seokjin
3. Jimin is basically the devil incarnate. I wonder why he wants to screw over Jungkook and Yoongi?
4. But he does have a good point about not ing your fans. That was not a good move on Jungkook's part and not just because Jiwoo is nuts
5. OH MY GOD. How did I forget how creepy Jiwoo is??
6. Jimin.... What a boi tho. And that Pied Piper reference? 11/10
7. Ummmmmm Hoseok and Yumi stargazing??? They make my soul happy and I just want to die whenever they're together... I want to die in a good way btw
8. Dr. Jekyl Mrs. .... I am D E C E A S E D
9. RIP JoKwon
11. Johanna and Seokjin are really cute ngl
12. Also I'm like 95% sure that Seokjin is the one married with children. I would bet all of the money in my bank account on it... so like 20 bucks
13. Yoongi is a love constipated lil and him pacing in front of Johanna's door makes me feel things. Idk if I want them together at this point because Yoongi is facing such indecision and Johanna (nor Mihoon) deserves that. No matter who he chooses, he'll prolly have a big question mark and what ifs
14. Jungkook is leaving for good? he dying tho?
15. Hoseok is so gosh darn cute and I just him and Yumi to be together forever bc YUMI DESERVES THE WORLD
16. Oh ... Aejin, damn dude. I don't blame her though, she got s by Taehyung
17. Ummm??? Now I'm convinced that Taehyung is the one with a girlfriend. Thanks Bogeum
18. Ugh Jimin stfu. You shouldn't be laughing at one of your friends being slapped

Lastly, Yeonhee and Namjoon make me cri. I'm so soft for them even though there's a big chance they won't be together or stay together in the long term if they're together at all. But Namjoon and Yeonhee have this really intellectual and emotional connection. Namjoon is so in tune with his emotions and Yeonhee is just amazed by his philosophy. I love them so much ;-;
iisMoMo #8
Chapter 46: i read it and was like Ken? wth i almost forgot that it was the introducing friends episode haha i had to reread to refreshen my memories. seokjin and yoongi "Bros before hoes" come on. even though i hate that saying i feel bad if the boys fought over a girl. JIMIN WHAT IS YOUR GOAL?! is there some lingering hate or anger he holds agaisnt some of the boys that we don't know of? i remeber reading something about a girl in the beginning right? T_T or is it just mandela effect? what is going on!?!? oh goodness....the tension between Jikook. OH SNAP! jiwoo damn girl taste that bad apple! follow the music! i'm a horrible person. hahaha WHAT! why wouldn't Homi last if he wasn't the hidden card? they are so in love its not even about money. ooooo what is going to happen.....in all honestly i feel really bad for jiwoo..poor girl just loves oppa, but she needs help and the camera and production crew is mixing bad ingredients for a cake that could ruin a girl forever.

i love the mutual and platonic love Seokjin and Joanna has. my eyes sparkled at Hoseok asking Jin to make Yumi a dress!!! boy is in love and it's so cute. ..........O___O wow.....i guess he kind of deserve that slap...some of the girls really came in here looking for love whiles i feel the boys did it just for their friend....

Golden middle....i like that a lot......seokjin made joanna a dress! thats so kind of him.

I like to see some Arie Luyendyk Jr. drama hahaha i know the lovey dovey stuff may be boring but can we see a little more of HoMi please? yea we know they love each other and may appear not to have anymore character development but i like to see at least a strong Yumi once. i dunno i'm always rooting for the weak anyways my last thing to say is damn is Jimin crazy? hahaha what is really going on!
AliceReverie
#9
Chapter 45: How did I not comment on this chapter?! *so much drama!!!!* <3
I seriously need to re-read it for all the unexpected match-ups! XD