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Fate always has its way and you can never run from it~

 


 

Hi guys.. I'm back with a new fic.. but this time, i try to attempt a chaptered one~ so, hopefully u guys will enjoy it~

this is upon rich_chili-nim's request~ so, yeah....

 

WARNING!

it's a boy x boy fic.. so if u don't like it then don't read it~ ^^

please excuse my grammar mistakes~

Foreword

20 years ago.

 

“Please spare her life...” the tears were trickling down his cheeks as he begging the guy with a knife from hurting his wife.

“I’m tired hearing words from you!!” a firm punch landed onto his face without warning from another guy that was guarding him. “You always get good things and I hate that! What’re you waiting for my friend? Do it,” 

As the request had been made; he smirked and walked slowly to the women that was lying helplessly onto the floor. “Watch this,” he bent down and mercilessly stabbed her a few times in stomach with the knife.

“NO!!!” he cried watching his wife dying slowly from losing lots of blood.

“Isn’t it good? Ouh, don’t worry... I’ll help you meeting her at the other side. Hold him,”

The guy that was guarding him held him straight. He whimpered as he received a stabbed in his stomach.

“You know... It’s kinda pretty to see the red colour tainted the white clothe, don’t you think so?”

“Y-You... despicable... human. Y-Y-You won’t... get away... from... this..” both of the men laughed. 

He stabbed again but this time onto his chest; piercing through his heart - making the victim screamed silently. Seeing the pool of blood around them; he stabbed again and again until the heartbeats of the man was stopped.

“Enough. Let’s clean things up,” he got up and was about to walked away; following the other when he noticed a necklace hang around the wife’s neck.

“You don’t need this anymore and thank you. I had so much fun,” 

He grinned wickedly and left. Unknown to the both of them, a pair of small eyes crying silently; watching the cruel act of them. The crime that unfold that night was concluded as a mere burglary by the police. No one knows the truth behind it except for the witness.

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sheilapiglet #1
Chapter 10: I just read your story from the beginning and it's really good so far. I feel so bad for what Jaejoong had to go through when he was younger....i'm actually glad that he got his revenge. But because he didn't kill the uncle, I wonder if he'll be put into prison? Perhaps the uncle won't testify to make up for what he did. I hope that YH and Minsu will be able to understand why Jae did what he did. Looking forward to your next update.
akiramia #2
Chapter 10: argh....what about yunho does he know
the story about jj parent and jj phobia....
akiramia #3
Chapter 8: it is jinu who the one killed jaejung parent...oh my god that painful memories ..
minsu_shipper #4
Chapter 8: *hikss
That painful memories... joongiieeeee... *saddd
Yunniiieeee!! Ppali notice your baby's worriesss! I'm afraid something will happen next ;)

....or not, author-nim?? XDD <3 <3 <3
minsu_shipper #5
Chapter 8: *hikss
That painful memories... joongiieeeee... *saddd
Yunniiieeee!! Ppali notice your baby's worriesss! I'm afraid something will happen next ;)

....or not, author-nim?? XDD <3 <3 <3
fanfan69 #6
Chapter 8: did jae do something to jinu? :O what happened?! what is happening?!
minsu_shipper #7
Chapter 7: Eh?? Suddenly heechul just jump into here? Kekekee i didnt see it coming..
And who is jinuuu? Why is he looks suspicious?? Someone related to jj's secret in the past??

Where is the next button author-nimm!!!! XD

Love the update ieraaa! Fighting!!
minsu_shipper #8
Chapter 6: Omiiii ieraaaa!! I just found this and understand the meaning of ur message! LOLL!!

Sooo who is this jinuuu?! Someone i have to prepare a knife or something? XD

Btw, where is baby minsu? *wink* hihi
rich-chili
#9
Chapter 5: Aahh.. so jjsshii is fearing closed narrow space and also holes. /nod nod/
minsu_shipper #10
Chapter 5: /grinnn/ i see what you said on the a/n.. Past memories?? Drama for yunjae?? Hwiiii!!! Where does this phobia thing will brought yunjae tooooo??? /drum rolls/

Godd!! Are junsu and changmin always bickering?! Min! Isnt he ur boyfie? So what?? XDD trickster.. /smirks/

<3