SCHOOL 2015 – RESET

Title [3/5]
The title is good. The problem is it gave too much. Why not try to make it “Reset” or anything related to the story. I mean, I know it’s a sequel of the drama, but the mere SCHOOL 2015 part is giving the readers too much information. Yet, it’s a good title.

Foreword [4/5]
Your foreword is your words. Foreword is used to warn the readers of the things that will happen, and at the same time, will excite them. It is also a way to communicate with readers. Although the foreword was consisted with your words, unlike the forewords I usually read, I found it exciting to read your story. I really like the foreword. It has the right amount of words. 

Grammar & Spelling [18/20]
I’m not sure if some of the words I detected are typos or really misspelled. But the grammar and spelling were still good. And in a sentence, all parts have a role. Articles aren’t used as decorations. Use your articles wisely, because that’s one of the reasons why you got an 18. But overall, I understood your story.

Plot [18/20]
The plot wasn’t that cliché. And the plot twists enters in the right time. The plot was good. You made it a big mystery, and also put romance. Although there are