reviewed by infinite-infinity20

Title:(4/5)
Your half of your title is unique. The Submissives of Desires is more unique then Dirty Little Secret.

Foreword: (3/5)
You should explain more about the characters and the plot. In your foreword, you have your other stories and reviews. There's not a connection to the title.

Grammar/Spelling:(20/20)
There's not one single mistake! Your spelling and grammer are great!

Plot: (14/20)
There are a lot of people that have this plot. It's cliche.. The only thing different is both Mark and OC has a boyfriend and girlfriend.

Characterization:(10/15)
The characters just tell me that it's a sequel, which it is not. There has to be a connection that they have some sort of backstory that explains the characters.

Flow:(14/15)
Well, it's an average pace. Just explain more. You actually skipped a part. Who is HyunJee?

Readability:(14/15)
In the beginning there was like big part where you couldn't see the words very well. But everything else is great!

Overall enjoyment: (14/15)
It's pretty good! I love how like they have this Dirty Little Secret!