[1st] Wolves or Wizards?

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Reviewer: Infinite-Infinity20

 

Review: 
Title {4/5}
The title is pretty good, already. And I think it's too common, you should change it (if you want, it's not my decision) maybe, something a little more unique?

Foreword {4/5}
The foreword it just makes me want to find out what happens, so the foreword is good and interesting. But you don't have a connection with the characters in the foreword until you say 'What to expect:'.

Grammer/Spelling: {18/20}

Your spelling is ok, but you didn't spell Kyung Soo right in one chapter. And I don't think you should put Taoie because it sounds kind of weird unless the name ends with a consonant like Sehunie/Sehunnie.

Plot: {18/20}
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