Reviewed by recklessdragon

Title [4.5/5]

I think it’s quite relevant because I noticed that you cleverly used ‘Oh, Sehun!’ several times in the story but this story doesn’t seem to center around Sehun. If anyone, it’ll be Lu Han.  

Foreword [4/5]

Foreword is relevant but could be better. I had to reread the first paragraph because it confused by slow brain for a moment. Foreword is straight to the point but doesn’t seem to be eye-catching to me.

Grammar & Spelling [18/20]

Chapter 3:  you repeatedly spelled customers as costumers

Customer: a person who purchases goods or services from another; buyer; patron.

Costumer:

1. a person who makes, sells, or rents costumes, as for theatrical production

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