reviewer: KillerGal

customer: fefedove

Title [4/5]

It’s not very original but at least it’s extremely relevant.

Foreword [4/5]

It is indeed relevant but failed to capture my attention, though I must point out that I really like it.

Grammar & Spelling [19/20]

There were little to no grammar & spelling mistakes.

“I can not remember” à “I cannot remember”

“No, you can not.” à “No, you cannot.”

Cannot is a word, not two.

“the halfway point between desire and disgust. Fear and fascination.” à “the halfway point between desire and disgust, fear and fascination.”

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